MOONLYTE

cant go wrong with a MINOR2GO loop lol, nice vocals man :) i do also agree with some of what Evisma said, but its well written, sang and produced so above all nice track keep it up :)

Noice

dude that shits dope... the intro (before you even started flowing) made me wanna download it right away... lol.... drop me an email dude.. I like what I heard.. maybe we could do some music over the internet or something.. my email is oliverstiebel@Hotmail.com

where you live mayne?

Hey Mr. Dye

The falsetto thing is mostly you not projecting your voice. Power should be coming from the diaphragm. It sounds like it's coming from your throat.

The pitch thing is just, it doesn't sound like you wrote "notes" to sing in parts. It seems kinda "fast and loose" right now. Like I said, I know this is in the early stages so I shouldn't judge it like it was finished.

I do like where you're going with this. Maybe there's pointers on projecting your voice and whatnot online.

Hope all is well.

Evan

It feels kind of an R&B sound but something els.

Moments reminiscent of "Mindless Self-Indulgence".

You sing in a low falsetto sometimes, like a loud whisper. Odd. Pitch seems kinda hard to pin down. Seems like you spent time on the lyrics, but not the delivery. I know you'll make it better and that this is in it's early form.

Take care

Evan

nice vocals and music so far. I sort of assume it is already finished anyway because I cant imagine the rest of the song.
Are you going to add some synth solo, or?
Nice work so far and looking forward for the continuation. Alex

Very promissing preview, I must say! I really like the vocals
and as if there's a bit of rock-opera style in it...very interesting.:)

Compliments_____Orlando

Oh and I play off Minor2Go a lot too. So if you ever need female vox to collab with someday. I'm always up for it.

I'd like to upload more of my stuff but apparently there's this rule of one song per day and it discourages me, lol

Later!

Oh no problem, hon!

The preview thing I totally understand.

I get about trying different angles. It's the best part in all this. Singing out short melodies behind certain areas in this track really does compliment it.

Though, it rocks as is! So whatever you decide. Can't wait to hear it completed!
Again, keep rocking!
:)
-Rae (Bre)

Most def!

I put silent screams (my signature) in my stuff ..
Sick track

I was singing freestyles some backings

You could also add backings not to layer what's there it but to fill it out? That's my suggestion ..
Though, overall great track

Keep rocking!
-Rae (Bre)

Hi Bro
absolutely it Has a little of everything
the piano was great with everything else
and with me as a Metal an rock fan
the screaming part was amazing
for me i think that mixing music styles can give such a great results
GO ON BRO

Samer

Another song about a demon:

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/161727

I thought we had some very different perspectives on the evil that is in the world. Yours is full of the beauty of the angel. But there is a dark side hidden in the bowing basses. A very good piece of music. I can't wait to listen to more of your music.

hi, again nice song... have you made any significant changes on this track over last months? For me it just sounds quite the same. No need to change anything in there of course...
Could you elaborate on who is doing the piano by the way? I like when meter changes at 3:36. I guess Planetjazzbass have over 900 but your score is very impressive. Congratulations, Alex

Great work bro! I really love those drums mixing with that vocal piece you place down there. This track is so emotional and will fit well in a lot of movies, especially war based movies. You should try to sale this track to a movie studio, they most likely would buy it, I know would.

Nonetheless Great track!

Great work my friend I love the electiveness of all of it. I think if Static Nomad reviews this he will comment on the reverse cymbals. ;-)
I love how it changes dynamically. Mixing wise I thing you may have used a bit too much low pass filter on this and maybe a bit more EQ is needed. The drums are awesome in this one and I wouldn't listen to any one who says to remove them. Epic Job my friend.
Cru

Nice work here, the strings sound really good.

not the kind of drums i would have expected but hey they work and it sounds awesome!

Great work man!

Very Nice work here.

I really enjoy hearing a young artist who puts a lot of thought into the composition rather than fitting things into some currently popular box....bravo....I see you already have quite a few input comments on the production, but the main thing for me is that you have the right musical ingredients...the production stuff comes with practice and the right sources of information....the cinematic genre is a great place for the freedom to try and creat your own musical mind pictures....enjoyed this one EYEDYE.....keep on......Ed

Hey EYE

Mate very soothing relaxing piece, but very emotional at the same time, if that makes sense, great transitions, sounds great coming through speakers, can not say it is your best work, as haven't checked out all your tunes to date, but this one to be proud of for sure, thanking you for the sharing this very enjoyable listen...fav...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...

Thank you for liking the photo

I really enjoy this! The vocals in this are very pleasant and fit nicely with the orchestral sound that you have. Our music styles are somewhat similar if you want to see what else I have you can go to www.soundcloud.com/iamall

I like it. Interesting composition.

best track an i like so much