MOONLYTE

I agree...this is your best work to date...compliments:)

Orlando

Hey man! I really, really enjoyed the orchestral middle section to this. Some interesting elements throughout the whole song though.
I'd suggest moving the drum hits to match the other piano at the beginning to make it more 'natural sounding'… OR quantizing your piano a little (not too much! don't want it to sound like a robot playing). There are many ways to do this for both MIDI and audio samples. Youtube.
Keep it up man!

hey, really nice song. I like the vocals at 0:41. The violin (from 0:27) has some processing added which I find a bit strange ...Agree with Chris: the drums are far too straight, especially when combined with choir in the second part (3:36)... But it is still very nicely put together. It is more like a 'fusion' genre for me: you seem to mix different styles - mostly pop with cinamatic with pumping rock drums, haha... Nice ending. Good dynamic along the piece. Too much limiting added to the track (for me).

Good work - keep it up!

Greetings,
Alex

This song is not perfect...singing is not perfect...nor the production is...but there's so much emotion in it that it's just incredible!! My favourite part is 1.25-1.46 which is
inexplicably cute.:)

Respect____Orlando

awesome melodies like it!

Awesome track :)

Steve

I'm impressed. It sounds really good, and I love the feelings you have put into this.

You can improve your music skills, if you pay more attention to the levels, so your track is not clipping(distorting). It is verboten (“forbidden”) to go into the red. Your music will sound so much better, if you lower the levels and don't over-compress it.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Gmex_4hreQ

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qUcgg2vMX_s

It is easy to fix, and your music skills will dramatically improve.

Hey!
First I was surprised about the aggressive kick drums and I didn't think they really was meant for the song, but then the choir started and it all suited perfekt!

This drum pattern is something that StaticNomad also use in a way, not exactly the same, but it great! Is it EZ-Drummer?

This is something I definitely love!

Good work!

Cheers,
Anders

nicely done! loved the piano :)

nice one

LOOOVe the piano. awesome track dude

Nice work on putting that together, sounds good. Nice bass on that, always love bass.

- JAweGuy

Brilliant work!

Your voice really fits with the piano. Really enjoyed it.

Best track so far - awesome strings. Works well as an instrumental but you should sing something over it man :)

Cheers and well done.

Maff

Good Work, U have many potential!

First track I've heard from you, let me just say this is extraordinary man. Really good work.

I loved it! The choir was the best part of the song. Was that a synth?

Not a bad little piece ya got here, man.
I'm always a sucker for the choral incorporation. Something I've strayed from inn my own work. I may just have to see about working it back in, again.
I was going to mention the drums, but it already has been, so I won't beat that one into the ground. (See what I did there?)
I think, though, that the last half of the song could have used a little more accenting dynamics. Some swooshes, sweeps, chimes, bells, etc. It's a good ending, but I think you have the ability to make it even better.
That's my opinion, though. Take it for what it's worth.
Take care.
V.

It's an epic Anthem in the making!!
Really looking forward to hearing this with the vox.

an impressive pianO theme as intro & a thoughtful & considered (calculated & meaningful ) expansion to that catchy movement ( mov2 )with those cello lines & cinematic chorus loops & to the end ...everything is used in its best place I think ..EYEDEYE as U've mentioned too , I think this is your best so far ( amoung what I've heared from U ) & as a fan of cinematic music I want to add this is one of the bests cinematic traX i've ever heared from such a young man like U & your generation ....congrats & best wishes.___Behnam

Cool track bro !!..luv the melody...At 1:36 when it kiks in slowly bringing the build...good work!!

peace !!
Jody

Cool work man.

Lotz of great things mixed well together.
I like it a lot. Very powerfull, much energy .....

Everything fits well and the pianos and voices sounds real nice.

Thanks for share this track with us

stay tuned
joe

Nice track, great job. I have to agree with comments made above regarding the drum track - it's all a bit "jerky" and takes away from the flow of the track a little for me (personal opinion of course, others may find it perfect!!!) A more human feel might have worked better. I don't think it's anything to do with the bass or the mix either - it's definitely the part. I would be very interested to know what you have used for your drum parts.

Apart from that I'm so impressed with this track. It's beautifully put together, nicely arranged and sounds excellent. Great job.

Richie

man, i can picture and entire short film with this one haha, the moments are very different and feel alive for themselves, great composition buddy !
Keep the good music !

Nice work..