Come Smile With Me - Billsals

29th May 2008 19:27 - 18 years ago
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Description : i was inspired by others on this site to give this a try,it's three different vocal tracks, a rap called "chill" from 22catch and a vocal melody from kaer trouz called "your my apocolypse" and another melodic line. i recorded all the instruments myself and used a couple of perc loops from looperman. it's really hard to keep objective sometimes and i can't really tell if this sounds like a cohesive work or a bunch of parts thrown together so any feedback would be great thanks!

Comments (8)

If you have time take a listen and give billsals some feedback.

Flanger
Flanger 13th Jun 2008 03:46 - 18 years ago
Not bad like the vibe,its good to hear something a little raw,seems to have worked out...keep flowin!!!!
Antony_Street
Antony_Street 10th Jun 2008 23:39 - 18 years ago
Cool track i enjoyed the vocals and the beat in the background. Keep it up!
profita
profita 10th Jun 2008 11:21 - 18 years ago
ur right on with the funk genre. strange track , i can picture some 70's afro man providing the vocals, lol.

not bad
skyrider
skyrider 9th Jun 2008 18:08 - 18 years ago
this is a great blend of styles its seems..like me .. you have no fear when it comes to throwing stuff from different genres in to the mix and making it work . mik
Randall822
Randall822 8th Jun 2008 08:37 - 18 years ago
Hi there Billsals,
Just getting around to listen to some tracks here and ran across your newest song. A very nice one this is. I like the vocals in particular. I need to start putting vocals into my songs somehow. I basically use ProTools 7.4 with an MBox Pro-2 Unit and have most all of Digidesigns software.
I have been using it only since Nov. 07, so I am still learning.

You did very well on the instruments and the recording itself. I could hear everything clearly. It takes time to do a nice recording. Most of mine take a month or so to do...and then a couple days of tweaking the sounds and effects. I have a lot of good ideas, but keep jumping around and trying different things all the time.
Being objective... often is hard when creating music as you say, as new ideas sometimes are tossed aside for the more 'familiar sounds'. Anyways....good job on this one.
Randy M.
Planetjazzbass
Planetjazzbass 2nd Jun 2008 16:03 - 18 years ago
Hey bill......cool creative work!......this is a great mix of rap,fusion and funk,works for me on heaps of levels...Mike's got a great presence with his voice and I like the dialogue scenario that you've created......excellent work,this has given me a few ideas.....cheers planet
billsals
billsals replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thanks a bunch man!!! this site has been a godsend for me, i have gotten so many ideas and so much inspiration from everyone i'm glad i can return a little to someone,thanks again!!!
rei4real
rei4real 31st May 2008 09:36 - 18 years ago
this is a fantastic track!!!
great composition ... love the flow ... and that awesome groove!!!
tight drums with perfect sound, great arrangement ...
simply cool!!

peace, rei
billsals
billsals replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thanks!! i really appreciate it.
Devodale
Devodale 29th May 2008 19:56 - 18 years ago
Intense dude! This is pure genius! Completely original!! I personally think this sounds great, not thrown together at all. A tad raw, with outstanding composition. LOVE IT!
billsals
billsals replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
your very kind,thanks! i'm glad you liked it,this one didn't come easy.

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