Description : I've been using reason 4 for about 4/5 months now and after a lot off messing about i've finally made my first track.
let me know what you think and any feedback would be great.
Hope you enjoy!
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What a trippy piece, in a good way, arrangement is good, like the way that you have arranged the synths, some sound like midi files but all working together so good, fav'd this one my friend...Peace Dave...Estefano...
Yet again thanks for ur review. I've not listened to this track in a long time, i wouldn't mind going back and polishing it up now i know i little more about producing but unfotunally i dont have reason no more.
cheers for the review. I always ment to go back to that track and finish it. I don't think any song i do is ever complete. And it's been just over a year and a half for this track. You should check out my new song called fat salad under electro. (i'm still wrking on it at the mo, tho and will probally update it soon.
Dig the alternative sounding guitar diddy !!! Goez real nice with the syncopated drumkit rhythm !!! Lik'd how "U" introduced different instruments/effxxx into the mix az "U" went along !!! The mix iz a little dry n' "U" might try adding some BaZZ !!! Really creative work !!! Kelley K
Forgive me for the Matrix reference, I am at least 40% Sci-Fi/Fantasy Geek at heart. You have some interesting sounds happening here. A couple thoughts (and please consider that this is only my very subjective opinion.) This track would benefit from a little more varied instrumentation. You have good melodies working, they could use a little extra variety. Also you might consider editing down to the strongest stuff, maybe cut 90 seconds or so to make it really tight. Very good for a first shot. Keep it going and always keep the love in what you do. Peace, Six
I love it mate, very good tune you've made. Very unuual, VERY trippy!! For a first track it as lots potential. Keep up the good work man.
Cheers S.
Ps: I dowloaded it.
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Looking for some feed back, constructive criticisms or even just your thoughts if you liked it or not. This is just a rough cut on this current WIP, just the bones of it if you will.. If you have some cool title suggestions, would love to hear those too.
Thanks for listening.
-B
What a trippy piece, in a good way, arrangement is good, like the way that you have arranged the synths, some sound like midi files but all working together so good, fav'd this one my friend...Peace Dave...Estefano...
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Cheers S.
Ps: I dowloaded it.