It Wasnt For Me - Veness

great sound, dope sound

Pretty much everything Fayz said.
You know something simple that would clean this up is just that high hat ma, just get rid of that off triplet part. Let it ride out on 8s.
Again your voice is very beautiful. You have a grip of potential.

hey i like the track, you got a really great voice, not so hot about the instrumental. the instrument is kinda dull and occasionally off-beat. but i think you saved it with your voice.

but i feel they need to be pushed forward more, and cut some of the low frequencies out of it and boost the higher frequencies. also a little tip i learned recently is that if you take your vocals and then make back up vox for it, in either the same tone, or higher or lower in a harmonic combination, it will really add presence to the vocals.

one last thing, you have a really good voice! but it feels like your not confident enough with it, it really seemed like you were pretty deep in your comfort zone, and thats alright while your starting out, i get that problem alot im not perfect either, but compared to me your 100 times better, and you really need to embrace that and have more energy and confidence in your voice. just throwing that out there,

otherwise, i liked the track, and your vocals really were the only thing that made me keep listening