Description : revised 1-19-11. electronic rock. its a hot mess but i wanted your input. how to make this song better before taking it to the studio? i think it needs more electronica (okay, and a real drummer) but haven't hatched anything yet. help a girl!
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Really glad I stumbled on this number, exquisite production and stylism... from the slow intro to killer bridge to quirky ending. I think the tune would do fine without the lyrics in the first portion and save the repeated phrase for an extended outro but just an idea. Best of luck getting this track picked up if not already, I realize this was uploaded quite some time ago. I will be keeping a lookout for you. -DF
wow this song i think is your best song. I've been bump this song a lot love what you done with it. well put together. i am a fan. and can't wait to hear what you come up with next.
wow just wow... I'm in the same situation NickQ. I can't think of anything that would improve what is already a great sounding track. Very creative! Just... wow :D
2:30-2:47 Awesome track, I have not heard this type of style and its good but it's not quite radio ready yet. You have more power in your voice than you think or have been told. The highlight to me in this track was (MSM) 2:30-2:47, That was the perfect bridge, little bit long but has an AMAZING build none the less! Not a lot of people use bridges in there tracks any more, they don't realize its one of the most important parts, I'm sure you know this already but the "Bridge" is a crucial part of the song structure because it creates the energy and excitement to your listeners building anticipation for the chorus which is the most known part of a song structure, the most memorable. This track could go far, Plain and simple, you can sing but you need more verses and about 2 more bars for your chorus and keep your bridge and you will have a hit. If you to work more on this let me know, I will write the rest of the song and we can share styles, we can do this beat and I will make another one for this song? Its not going to be an overnight project though. I use "Melodyne" which is a professional 1200$ program to move each vocal note to the correct pitch or position in time. Fine-tune their length, their volume or the intensity of their vibrato. Basically I will take the excess ash and feed back out and It'll sound pro rec. and radio ready. All my artists (Rappers) are trying to go solo and once they get that ideal in there head without structure there music gets to be repetitive, same rap and melody and i'm trying to do something different. I heard your voice and I knew you could be a hit. I don't mind rendering HQ and vocal mixing for you on this song, all I'm asking is you do one of my songs and I will send you the lyrics and instrumental via e-mail and the only thing you need to send me back is the acapella as clean as possible so we can make the track sound Club and radio ready. this isn't a joke and i'm not backing out because i just spent 6500$ on pro-tools, 2 more Yamaha Caragen Master switch boards, 3 mixers, VST's, SF2 Files, Vocal rendering Software and my beautiful Bosse JX-212 stereo system. I have everything I need and more to make both tracks and any other you might want to work on in the future, sound beyond professional.
i like feel of of the song has a odd sound to it. and awesome lyrics. maybe some funky bass in back ground or some kind of funky percussion just a little quite in parts.. good song
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cottoncoe@live.com
I'm gonna let you do you thing.
Hit me up if your interested Angela.
yeah!!!!...this is fine.