First - Estix

2nd Nov 2010 19:39 - 15 years ago
Description : This song is supposed to be an intro to an "album". I'm not sure yet, how I'm going to make the rest of the songs, other than the fact, that I intend to follow up the general melody from the end of the intro, and so on. I'm new to making music myself, so I'm very open to criticism. I have my own ideas on how to do things, but any suggestions would be more than welcome.

Comments (2)

If you have time take a listen and give Estix some feedback.

GramoChopin
GramoChopin 16th Jan 2011 19:48 - 15 years ago
I dont know what the guy below is hearing harmonically, but i don't think there should be much harmonic content in this track. it spews a never ending ambience to it, so in result, lingers and doesnt flow but yet speaks a strange language from within you. so i think it sounds good enough with it lingering besides harmonically/symphonically carrying itself throughout. this also reminds me of a bit of shadow hearts soundtrack. it's a great dark rpg that i think you should check out. anyways, i like this so much, i'm going to download it. great job man.

p.s. i re edited that battle on the grid track. see how you like it now.

NeoBane
Estix
Estix replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for this man. I had completely left this track laying there. After your comment, I decided to listen to it again, and it feels actually real nice when I just want to drift away. I also listened to the slightly updated WIP regarding this track and I didn't like the added effects that I put in.

About Shadow Hearts, it seems like the first game wasn't that well received, but the 2nd one seems like it may be worth a purchase. It's been added to "the games I will eventually play" list, that is already cluttered with things I actually have, so it's a long-term project!
VickyDan
VickyDan 3rd Nov 2010 09:07 - 15 years ago
First, this track is overcharged to be classified in "Soundtrack." Then, the basic idea is not bad, but lacks harmonic part sincerely. But you continue on your idea, which I think will become increasingly good at slant to measure progress. Good luck for the future, there is still work ahead.

Dan

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