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Listen To Breath With Me By The Writers Poet Ft Imaijen Spoken Word Song By TheWritersPoet41 At Looperman.com

1st Aug 2010 22:37 - 15 years ago
Description : This ia a new track from my upcoming spoken word album : The Mind of a Writer. I had to edit it short to make it fit on looperman. The beat is by Protege that's man for the beat, vocals by Imaijen and produce by Forthaafterlife Productions.

Comments (6)

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lantern0121
lantern0121 10th Feb 2011 01:36 - 14 years ago
i like it but its a bit hard to hear, bit over compressed?!?!?!
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
Thanks for the review it wasn't mix and master until it was time.
N2G
N2G 13th Dec 2010 08:20 - 14 years ago
My homeboy does a lot of poetry and is a pretty good writer... I see a lot of what he does in what you do... you have really deep lyrics... keep doing ya thang bro
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
Thanks big homie I love the spoken and what it bring with music. Be sure to check out my Jan 2011
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 8th Dec 2010 17:14 - 14 years ago
Very nice. This track really is well done. I would bring your vocals forward in the mix. As Thethanx said, they really are the focal point on this so it would be nice to have them front and center. But that is minor nit picking on my part. Great backing track (kudos to Protege) and great female vox (props to imajen). I'd say this one is a keeper. Well done.
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
Thanks for review the track it's one of my fav and i will be the better quailty on here later
Thethanx
Thethanx 7th Nov 2010 17:49 - 15 years ago
It's nice to hear some spoken word instead of just straight rap here on this site. I feel like your vocals could be a little less reverby and even louder. Your words are really powerful and totally make the piece, so I just feel like they should be really center stage.

It's very very cool though, You use the rhythm of the music wonderfully, and Imaijen's singing just pulls it all together. Great piece!
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
Thnkx Man I really appreciate it yeah we need a variety on here to much rap and hip hop for sure I love what i do and I have an coming soon so keep listening
imajen
imajen 15th Sep 2010 07:02 - 15 years ago
Wow this is an amazing track we did. I love it.
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
Yeah we sure did knock this one out :)
Becca
Becca 31st Aug 2010 07:44 - 15 years ago
I am lovin this, its smooth. Going on the favs
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 replied Unknown
Thanks you I'm very glad you like it

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