Tags : | Spoken Word | 7.57 MB

Description : This track I actually put together in less than a half an hour. I built it around a string loop from Piano Sounds. Thank you for that. Than I laid my spoken word vocals over it. The poem is about conforming to what society demands. Almost losing yourself in a trance, hence I built a trance trakc to surround the vocals. This is the first track I am uploading here, so please all feedback is greatly appreciated

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  1. JohnBoutilier
    JohnBoutilier on Sat 19th Mar 2011 - 13 years ago

    Great words, my friend, and well spoken. The backing track would be more effective it came a little more to the forefront.

    All The Best

    John

  2. BrianMaiden407
    BrianMaiden407 on Thu 15th Jul 2010 - 13 years ago

    Love the way the voice was recorded guy! really makes the track!
    pianosounds has monster ears big time donet he? nice track, like the reciting!

    Bm;)

    Writenow921
    Reply by Writenow921

    THanks, and yea PianoSounds is pretty amazing, i am working with a few of his other samples now. I'm really glad i found htis ste, trying to make some connections, and hopefully I will have another track up soon.

  3. Effluence
    Effluence on Thu 15th Jul 2010 - 13 years ago

    Hi, your words are very powerful great lyrics. Your track is off balance your vocals are much louder than the music. The words are very deep, so you can captue people with the innotation in your voice, some parts can by loud, some soft, some angry some painful.. ect. Your vocals are loud mostly, so innotate and prononciate your words.
    Respect
    ~Effluence~

    Writenow921
    Reply by Writenow921

    Thanks, I will try to incorporate the advice into my next piece. Hopefully I will have something new up soon and maybe you can check it out.

  4. TheWritersPoet41
    TheWritersPoet41 on Thu 15th Jul 2010 - 13 years ago

    I'm feeling this if you can get someone to balance your track out then it would be awesome

    Writenow921
    Reply by Writenow921

    Thank you, and yea, i know the levels are all off, i was just excited to get a track up you know, hopefully i will learn to balance it out more with practice.

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