SOUTH IN YOUR MOUTH - Sparkfirehot

3rd Jul 2010 12:46 - 16 years ago
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Description : did this one lastnight so check it out and tell me what u think.

Comments (3)

If you have time take a listen and give sparkfirehot some feedback.

RoCkYPRODUCTION
RoCkYPRODUCTION 3rd Jul 2010 13:28 - 16 years ago
dark dark dark....has a great beat....strings are LOL no words nicly done dude a straight A+

rocky production :)
sparkfirehot
sparkfirehot replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thanx homie and thanx for stopping by much luv fasho peace.
phantomhim
phantomhim 3rd Jul 2010 12:58 - 16 years ago
Cool track. The dark string stabs and the drums go nicely. Maybe all this one needs is a vocal... not sure. Nice tho fam.

EDIT: You're well on your way man, I'm not there myself yet.
sparkfirehot
sparkfirehot replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thanx homie, i'm just trying to get better....tryin to get on your level which will take me years to do.
danbo
danbo 3rd Jul 2010 12:53 - 16 years ago
Hello!
Your composition is good, but I think that at a moment, you can introduce other lyrics or instruments to make rupts, to create something which doesn't like a mechanical loop, even if there are evolutions in your composition.
I write down that, because I fell that after one minute, this melody can evoluate in a cetain way.
But that's only my opinion.
Good idea.
sparkfirehot
sparkfirehot replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
i feel u thanx for the info man much luv peace.

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