Slipping Away - Jaesen

Description : This is the more complete song of Slipping Away. this is just vocals over a loop rei_dirty01_E_120. No drums or bass. I sing all vocals and wrote the lyrics. It still needs work but is my 2nd attempt. I am poor at producing so any comments to help are appreciated.
Lyrics:

You took full advantage/
Of the downward spiral/
My life had become/
To push me further down/

//I was laying/
With my face in a puddle/
You took your size 9 shoe and/
tried to make me drown/

//I wont soon forget/
I will never let/
You win /

//Of the many/
Weapons at your disposal/
You chose the dull Axe /
In which /
to cut me down to size//

you took a swing and /
the whole earth shook/
you stood there grinning/
while I lay there bleeding then/
you went to claim your prize//

Cause I/
Been slippin away/
And You/
Been down on me..for some time//

And now/
I try to close my eyes/
But all I can see is /
Your face looking back at me//

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