Irreversable Theory - Senciman

I think you have some good ideas with regards to vocal manipulations and general track theme using a hard sine kick and detuned rave pads. However, I do feel that the overall substance needs to be stronger. Now this may be just my personal preference but I may have incorporated some manic prodigy style hard d&b percussion and had some detuned rave stabs along the way, if for no other reason than to give this track that real 'Wow! factor. Plus I think it would be cool to vary the bassline with another exciting section of Phat enveloped LFO hooks just to keep the listeners on their toes, so to speak. I think this track has some promise but if you went for a re-version with more variants as described above you'd get yourself a whole load of attention for sure. Thanks for sharing, Greetz, --Davey--