Hardstyle - Advanced

while i respect his opinion, i have to disagree with chud...i really like the ambient feel of this tune. i got lost in it. its perfect background music. to me, just because something is simple doesnt mean its boring. i recognize i may have this opinion because i generally write background music lol.
..and remember, these are just opinions. if you like and are proud of your work, nothing eelse anyone says matters. ;)
nice work!

Its good, i was impressed with the start of it, You dont often hear drum beats that well programmed here on looperman, but this ones definitely shows that you can produce drum beats well (if you made it yourself that is)

But your synths are quite standard and slightly boring. The overall song doesnt really keep me interested or give me anything to go 'wow that was clever' about. Its just a bit slow really.

Good drums though! I would take those drums and do some fast loud synths over them instead. Making 'deep, dark dubstep' is easy really, its all slow and you dont really need to take anytime in creating an intresting synth. Just use a saw and off you go.

Anyway good attempt for a first time. Well done.