I Want To Be Your Star - CSoul

I kinda love this track. Sp much that it geserves some further investigation. I see obvious influences that maybe could be tapped even more.

Massive Attack produced by Mad Professor - it's the mad professor part that I'd look into. This dub pushes towards electro trance in the Massive Attack, Bjork, Portishead way. All of which are great artists to research while refining your sound.

Arrangement is spot, I might want to re arrange some instrumentation for a truer dub sound as the elctronica aspect starts to overpower the atmosphere. Especially the 180 bpm hard style drum beat at the end... now it's not dub it's rave, diva rock. The feel changed so much from the beginning to end I am now confused as to why you chose dub.

some great ideas here.. some time the vocal slips in timing but to be honest that doesn't matter because thats so easily fixable it's not really worth mentioning.. the sounds you've used remind me of Marrakesh in the morning busy bustling .. just lovely.. nice .. keep 'em coming brother