Stars And Clouds - Dolawhite
10th Nov 2009 01:16 - 16 years ago
Description : Taking a break from writing and recording so i had time to finish this up, i think its finished.
Beat by ConeyIsland, lyrics and vocals by me, with some help from the Clapper.
Any feedback, advice, criticism welcome.
Stay Gold
Beat by ConeyIsland, lyrics and vocals by me, with some help from the Clapper.
Any feedback, advice, criticism welcome.
Stay Gold
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Comments (3)
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DJShemZee 25th Feb 2010 07:47 - 16 years ago
this one is pretty cool...pls check out my version of this song https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/57297 i love the lyrics great job man
dolawhite replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thanks man. i listened to your version. not bad, it sounded unique with the lyrics mixed with that poppy beat
CONEYISLANDRECORDS 31st Dec 2009 23:17 - 16 years ago
Nice man. I never expected anyone to put lyrics to this. Kinda made it as a random abstract intrumental. Sounds decent.
playboi13 15th Dec 2009 17:11 - 16 years ago
Im going to be extremely honest with you because i see you have the potential and drive. lyrically you're already there, but your production as well as your delivery was slightly off. going into the red is not always a bad thing it really depends on what kinda sound you're trying to produce. i say that because your vocals overwhelmed the instrumental. you delivery was choppy, almost like you were trying to rap like someone else. thats a problem i have with a lot of my artist. they try to mimic someones style making there song sound like they're reading off the paper.(rap like you rap and i promise you wont lose) Overall it was a great song. you got your message across and i was feeling it. like i said your lyrics are already there!!!! BTW that hook is killer....keep makin' hits
dolawhite replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
exactly the review i was looking for, i appreciate the honesty, id like to get that more.
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