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Listen To Carnaaage Grime Song By Eldon1991 At Looperman.com

13th Sep 2009 02:46 - 15 years ago
Description : I'm not a fan of grime music but i wanted to give a go at making an instrumental, i think the result is pretty good, then again i'm not sure if i've quite got that grime feel to it, check it out and please review.

Comments (3)

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Skitsophrenik
Skitsophrenik 18th Apr 2010 11:16 - 15 years ago
not for of grime m8,nearly there! im not sayin it aint good tho man. jus need to mybe do what kizzer1011 said n slow drum dwn abit..think bass n kick need to have a liitle mre dirt to em lol
jus keep messin round with it m8,n save different versions everytime.then look back n listen n see which one u thinks is the best or wether two could get merged together or summat.
Anyways m8,keep up ur good wrk..ur better than me anyways!
Peace
Eldon1991
Eldon1991 replied Unknown
Cheers Skitsophrenic (cool name too),
Yeah thanks for the advice but i did this track so long ago now that i dont have the effort in me to go back and do it again lol, i can see what u mean about the drums, they're too fast!
kizzer1011
kizzer1011 13th Sep 2009 15:15 - 15 years ago
yeh man its a pretty blessed song da drums could be slowed down a bit, even though your not really a fan of grime, id say your pretty natural at it you should do some more songs. well put it this way, ive made about 100 grime beats and i downloaded yours so keep working at it, safe init
codymeiser
codymeiser 13th Sep 2009 11:32 - 15 years ago
I like how this song pans back and forth in the beginning. The gun shots fit this song well and then like the door opening? Thats what i got out of it anyways. HAHA. I dont know if its "Grime." Anyways I like it its a fun song.

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