Listen To EuNegMa - ProductioN Funk Song By EuNegMa At Looperman.com

A fairly long track, but you manage to keep it varied and intereseting, so you don't get bored while listening, which is quite an achievement for a 7 minute + song! I agree with n0mad in that it would be excellent if you added in another melody on top that stands out against what you have already.

Keep up the good work,
Chiisu

I love the sounds you use in this one! The drones floating up from your keys are rich, powerful, and quite unexpected (in a good way). It's the kind of track that you can dance to without breaking a sweat - something rather noble about that. Since you're asking for advice here, I'm wondering if you've thought about bringing a melody line in somewhere. Something out front and VERY different from the other sounds you've got going on? Again, something unexpected. Like a thumb piano (kalimba) electrified and run through distortion (that's what I was imagining while listening). Anyway, whatever you do with this, I think you've got a good, solid foundation! Cheers.