Listen To TORN Heavy Metal Song By 520 At Looperman.com

20th May 2009 01:27 - 16 years ago
Description : Just made this one. Iknow this would sound great with lyrics on it. Got a couple of loops from here but mainly all me. The guitar is me. Anyways I would like some feedback on this one from those of you who have time. Let me know what you think. And if you have some lyrics for this one hit me up.

Comments (3)

If you have time take a listen and give 520 some feedback.

FaridHumanoid
FaridHumanoid 14th Jul 2013 07:55 - 12 years ago
I think the intro part is too long too.
But at all I like it.
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 25th Mar 2011 00:24 - 15 years ago
If you intended this to be a purely instrumental piece, I would agree with dt, but since you don't........... I like it. I think you have a pretty descent backing track here that would kick with a good set of vocals and a nice solo. Stands pretty well by itself as a chill out piece.

I enjoyed it :-)

John
dylanthermos
dylanthermos 20th May 2009 09:37 - 16 years ago
My honest opinion is that your song could be a very good song.
The intro before the drums come in is a bit too long.
The chord structure possibly could be embelished.
It sounds very repetitive and needs more segments to keep the listener interested.
Now for good stuff the overall sound is very good, drums sound bright and very life like. Synth sounds are interesting, delay timings fit the feel.
In fact it's quite a moody little piece on second listening.....this track needs work but you can do it and then it will be brilliant........Hope I have'nt offended you in anyway was trying to be honest in a nice way.........Dylan.

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