Updated, - LongJohnsLiver

Name: updated,
Duration: 211 s
Channel: LongJohnsLiver
Description: i need a lyrisist to do a rap to this beat, just let me know

Updated,

LongJohnsLiver

23rd Mar 2009 21:57 - 17 years ago

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23rd Mar 2009 21:57 - 17 years ago

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Description : i need a lyrisist to do a rap to this beat, just let me know

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Cynical_Sense 10th Jun 2009 10:08 - 17 years ago

hey, what lyrics you got prepared for this, i'll help if you'd like

LongJohnsLiver replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

i haven't really, i had some friends try and do it, but i didn't like the way they one of the guys was trying to rap in it.

if you want to give it a shot, that's fine with me. i just want to hear it when you've finished it : )

Gotti 12th Apr 2009 04:15 - 17 years ago

whats going on man.. sorry i didnt see your reply before.. you could always just message me no problem.. but to your question... i mean regardless of what you using.. you should have an effects rack in your program.. channel to snare to an open channel if you havent and id say throw a reverb on it and find one that sounds good if it still dont hit harder change to a more impact snare feel me?.. oh the one the thing why i wrote on here.. i think that synth in the background the distant one.. might have to go up or down and octave or two something doestn sound right to me.. still think its a tight track tho.. good stuff man get back at me

TrastaMan 11th Apr 2009 06:33 - 17 years ago

nice and abstract track you got here.

magnus22 24th Mar 2009 02:55 - 17 years ago

i could rite u a rap
wut kinda rap u lookin for?
mines r gang related

LongJohnsLiver replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

das wasup den, i'm not picky, as long as you can rap and have good mic

Gotti 24th Mar 2009 00:39 - 17 years ago

whats going on man its a phat beat but bring the snares out more.. for me the snare is the pace i would rap.. so deff bring it out some more.. experiment a lil bit.. it could come out crazy you feel me? - gotti

LongJohnsLiver replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

we'll how should i bring it out more, do you just mean cut it up higher? overall do you think that anything else was off? i thought the bass wasn't loud enough

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