thanks Rita your support is great, lucky you caught it, ive just changed it, wait till you check it, im really proud of the message and of course my song writing on it, as i was with the text in this too
and yeah dead right we are proud and ive got thunder raps coming, nobodies touching these bars :))

everythings cool bro, nothing personal, i just seem to be able to get the right words, i wrote this along with another couple when i had two friends over and yeah we was having a few drinks and a blunt :))
thanks for the good feedsack Captain

thanks Robin, ive done a few genres now experimenting that is why i enjoy it so much flipping. vocal variation is something im trying to achieve knowing when to sidechain fx into the mids or a lower attack on the lows or an increase of delay in the highs etc, pronouncing is vital to add character, my next in a few days has a bit more, my accent is clearly visible in the phonics with tones increases and softer moments, its a controversial subject too, handled delicately from a mouth piece like me :))
oh bye the way have a listen to this if you get a chance, again well out my comfort zone but possibly one of my very best and a first go at Rock, a collab with Danke
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/243878

great to have you back around and im looking forward to your new work. sorry to here about your loss Steven, never a good time for anyone, hope your all good my thoughts are with you.
i have really been putting the work in on music over the last 3-6 months, areas i have heard about but didn't really understand clearly sound structures stereo separation chord progressions key scales frequency ranges etc, so im excepting my work to sound better, also i usually sing from a lyric sheet, even though i know the words i wrote them but still use a lyric text for safety but my last two i stood up and freestyled of the top of my head, i think the delivery feels more natural then but i little more difficult too, thanks again for your support Steven its always appreciated as is your feedback

thanks bro, im just starting a session now, so your sharp reply is a great welcome boost. when i wrote theres gonna be murder 6 mins to long i think i do too many verses but im playing devils advocaat, i'm the main vocal the backing and the accompaniment, also out of respect to the beatmaker i try to use all the track, i feel they would be like he's cut 1.20 of it, now you say fade the track it gives me comfort to think i was wrong in my thinking, but really for rappers yeah 2 verse maybe a repeat or a hook/bridge and finish with repeats
but your spot on about having too much, dont show it all at once just come packed so you can reload when its needed eh. i'll take that it to tonight's session

thanks bro, my son loved Grassroots, but he said you give them too much :)), he said that should of been two tracks every put down got better and the flow was tight, tut tut im not on his play list, its a 4 min track, what does he know, he might be on to something, repeating bars is what everyone does, i just write a fresh verse, i understand that sometimes to much is to much, i dunno what do think bro your my BeatMaker

thanks for that Joe my explanation to why i love hip hop is on Cinco's reply but like a lot of people remind me this adult style suites me, a range that sits with my voice but nothing will top the vibrancy and colour of my favourite genre and beat makers like you just motivate my writing, thanks again for your time and shares Morash

hi Manu, hes a great artist thanks for reading about him, when i first started he told me not to be afraid told me not to disguise my voice with to much reverb etc, i aint visited him for a while but hes a great guy, if you look at all the rock stars of that genre their leather boots jackets was all Alan Mairs label hes a great tailor too, he's friends with Jagger Ronnie Wood the late Freddie Mercury and Bowie, a 15 year old Bowie worked for Alan on his stall on Camden Market. they all toured Europe together and styed in the same hotels, throwing tv's out windows lots of fights and buses of groupies proper rock star attitude, ive sat in his kitchen 4ft away and he'll play his 12 string acoustic guitar and sing, its amazing, my brother is a good keyboard player too, you dont play with big stars live if your shit it would standout a mile
i am going to try singing a little lower too, i have realised if i stay in a range i can hit, then the EQ is easier instead of trying to get it their with fx. ive taken a lot on board over the last 3 months on scales keys chord progressions frequency ranges etc, ive been writing little melodies and introducing 7th 9th 11th chord progressions and inverting notes, using different instruments synths and strings playing the same notes but moving them up and down an octave so they not fighting for the same space and frequency, i am getting a much clearer idea of sound structure now, ive still got lots to learn but im stimulated by it and thats only because ive gained knowledge that i though was out of my skill range as before music to me just looked like Chinese :))

bro you dont know how much that means to me, actually for real lol, im nearly 60 i should be nowhere near rappin' i do like being adult, black and white, greys, i wear flat caps and snap backs but hip hop lets me be colourful and vibrant and be the colours i feel, summertime i dress like the weather straw hats trilby's pork pie hats purple sun glasses and steam punk shades too baggy linen slacks and sneakers and i try to reflect that vibrancy in my tracks

thanks Dean you have become part off our community since you joined us, another great artist to listen to also, when i joined we had alot more in the featured community, i dont think it will ever get back to when it first launched but some of us try to stimulate growth, yes we are a little older and wiser we expect nothing, we all would be sat at home listening to our own work, why join a community if your not going to join in its pointless. i try to send messages in my lyrics, even my crass rapping i send out the signals about being confident and be yourself, for a mental health sufferer positiveness is a difficult word to exhibit but something you must achieve if you want to control it. i quoted you to Zoot too, comments do give you motivation bro, thanks again for your time

bro i thought Zoots believable was great add captivating to it, makes me feel like i drew gold, along with me sounding good on Manu' average ear buds, im speechless.
really to spend time alone with another artist gives me pleasure thats what we all do, headset on just you and your listen alone, to be able to deliver you to that place is what all artist want, it gives me great joy and motivation to keep going.
your company would be great to keep, the stories we could talk Mike the tales we COULD tell. keep listening my next is both expressive but powerful and sends the message, its actually a history lesson too

hi Manuela, maybe your average ear buds are faulty, have them checked while your at the studio :))
no seriously, thanks so much your feedback has always been important as is all the feedback, but you get were im coming from, im fortunate to have a pro like you helping to guide me, i can ask another artist also, but i dont, he is my brothers bestie Alan Mair, google him, hes just released a new track, this guy was/is a megastar, one of Britain's best bass players he's Scottish the front man of the beat stalkers, and the founding member of the only ones, check out another girl another planet, you should know it been covered by Blink 182 and physcodelic furs they added pretty in pink to it and vodaphone also used it for one of their campaigns, my brother played keys for him at a concert for a huge scot producer who died. my younger bro on keys Alan on bass Dave Stewart lead and Annie Lennox on vocal, wow goose bumps eh.
maybe a little of their talent has rubbed of on me, a very tiny bit mind

thankyou so much Chris just to read that one word believable means everything to me, all artist want to create music that others can relate to, overthinking is something a lot of people do especially those with mental health issues, and although comments are a bonus to receive and should never be expected, as deanp recently wrote me they give you motivation for an otherwise thankless task, so thanks for your motivational comment, i wrote 5 tracks in one session all to looper colleagues hence my rapid staging my next is powerful too and the message i deliver, watch out for it bro