Overthinking Staring Out Windows - Dimestop

13th Mar 2024 22:24 - 2 years ago
Description : hi guys something different, this is to zivon music's beautiful Lo-Fi piece called recovering overthinker.
never tried this genre before but i believe i can write a good vocal to any style.
i'll never be the greatest vocalist, i openly admit that, i have improved and will continue to do so hopefully, although i consider myself an all rounder my strongest skill i believe is song writing, hope you like this i thought it was a little gem

Comments (10)

If you have time take a listen and give dimestop some feedback.

RitajustRita
RitajustRita 18th Mar 2024 22:17 - 2 years ago
You didd it again!
I think everyone would agree with me that you are a great songwriter.
And so does your courage and perseverance.
This quiet song suits you very well
You write that you will never become a real singer.
They are the same words I use.
The most important thing is that you have fun doing it and can also express yourself.
Maybe if we had started younger we would have been much further along with everything by now.
But that is precisely why we can be proud of what we have started and learned at our age.
dimestop
dimestop replied 18th Mar 2024 - 2 years ago
thanks Rita your support is great, lucky you caught it, ive just changed it, wait till you check it, im really proud of the message and of course my song writing on it, as i was with the text in this too
and yeah dead right we are proud and ive got thunder raps coming, nobodies touching these bars :))
Cyberflares
Cyberflares 16th Mar 2024 14:38 - 2 years ago
To say you left it all out there for us to hear i shake your hand and tip my hat more balls than migiver lol really though that was different from you but still good in parts, like masa cru said next is varying your vocals, for this type of singing that is i liked it i liked it a lot had something about it still ringing in my ears. Dam straight man.
dimestop
dimestop replied 16th Mar 2024 - 2 years ago
thanks Robin, ive done a few genres now experimenting that is why i enjoy it so much flipping. vocal variation is something im trying to achieve knowing when to sidechain fx into the mids or a lower attack on the lows or an increase of delay in the highs etc, pronouncing is vital to add character, my next in a few days has a bit more, my accent is clearly visible in the phonics with tones increases and softer moments, its a controversial subject too, handled delicately from a mouth piece like me :))
oh bye the way have a listen to this if you get a chance, again well out my comfort zone but possibly one of my very best and a first go at Rock, a collab with Danke
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/243878
crucethus
crucethus 16th Mar 2024 04:43 - 2 years ago
Very cool chill vibe mate. Your next phase is to start thinking about Consonant expressions in your vocals. The best Vocalists have an innate ability to twist the sound by how they enunciate. (It's kinda why I don't sing very much on my work) Anyhoo. I am back. I needed a break to sort out family trauma and morning. I will be working on some new material in 2024. I have been especially listening to Clannad and understanding some of the more esoteric sounds. I did a chat GPT search for my name (Crucethus) and was pleasantly surprised by the results it gave. That has kickstarted me back. Warm regards my friend, always a listening pleasure.
dimestop
dimestop replied 16th Mar 2024 - 2 years ago
great to have you back around and im looking forward to your new work. sorry to here about your loss Steven, never a good time for anyone, hope your all good my thoughts are with you.
i have really been putting the work in on music over the last 3-6 months, areas i have heard about but didn't really understand clearly sound structures stereo separation chord progressions key scales frequency ranges etc, so im excepting my work to sound better, also i usually sing from a lyric sheet, even though i know the words i wrote them but still use a lyric text for safety but my last two i stood up and freestyled of the top of my head, i think the delivery feels more natural then but i little more difficult too, thanks again for your support Steven its always appreciated as is your feedback
BeatMaker4real
BeatMaker4real 15th Mar 2024 18:46 - 2 years ago
Lol, yea I can see that..two verses for a single rapper, maybe a third for an added feature...it's always best to have too much, than not enough..can always just fade out after the second hook. Props to your son for having that producer ear bro.
dimestop
dimestop replied 15th Mar 2024 - 2 years ago
thanks bro, im just starting a session now, so your sharp reply is a great welcome boost. when i wrote theres gonna be murder 6 mins to long i think i do too many verses but im playing devils advocaat, i'm the main vocal the backing and the accompaniment, also out of respect to the beatmaker i try to use all the track, i feel they would be like he's cut 1.20 of it, now you say fade the track it gives me comfort to think i was wrong in my thinking, but really for rappers yeah 2 verse maybe a repeat or a hook/bridge and finish with repeats
but your spot on about having too much, dont show it all at once just come packed so you can reload when its needed eh. i'll take that it to tonight's session
BeatMaker4real
BeatMaker4real 15th Mar 2024 08:51 - 2 years ago
Nice work on the track dimestop, I see you slowed it down for us on this one:)

Keep pushing bro and having fun with it.
dimestop
dimestop replied 15th Mar 2024 - 2 years ago
thanks bro, my son loved Grassroots, but he said you give them too much :)), he said that should of been two tracks every put down got better and the flow was tight, tut tut im not on his play list, its a 4 min track, what does he know, he might be on to something, repeating bars is what everyone does, i just write a fresh verse, i understand that sometimes to much is to much, i dunno what do think bro your my BeatMaker
Morash
Morash 14th Mar 2024 22:02 - 2 years ago
Chill vibe vocals. These beats suite your style, nice work.
dimestop
dimestop replied 14th Mar 2024 - 2 years ago
thanks for that Joe my explanation to why i love hip hop is on Cinco's reply but like a lot of people remind me this adult style suites me, a range that sits with my voice but nothing will top the vibrancy and colour of my favourite genre and beat makers like you just motivate my writing, thanks again for your time and shares Morash
CINCOCENT
CINCOCENT 14th Mar 2024 16:42 - 2 years ago
Hey I think I like the srylo better than you rapping actually lol for reals!
dimestop
dimestop replied 14th Mar 2024 - 2 years ago
bro you dont know how much that means to me, actually for real lol, im nearly 60 i should be nowhere near rappin' i do like being adult, black and white, greys, i wear flat caps and snap backs but hip hop lets me be colourful and vibrant and be the colours i feel, summertime i dress like the weather straw hats trilby's pork pie hats purple sun glasses and steam punk shades too baggy linen slacks and sneakers and i try to reflect that vibrancy in my tracks
deanp
deanp 14th Mar 2024 16:15 - 2 years ago
Nice lyrics Paul. Your song writing skills are impressive and your adaptability, flexibility and commitment are obvious. I know I've mentioned it before, but I would like to reiterate that I like how strong messages are sent to the listener via your lyrics in all of your tracks.

You are gifted in your ever improving song writing skills and you are nurturing that talent well by acquiring relevant experience. Looking forward to hearing more from you.
dimestop
dimestop replied 14th Mar 2024 - 2 years ago
thanks Dean you have become part off our community since you joined us, another great artist to listen to also, when i joined we had alot more in the featured community, i dont think it will ever get back to when it first launched but some of us try to stimulate growth, yes we are a little older and wiser we expect nothing, we all would be sat at home listening to our own work, why join a community if your not going to join in its pointless. i try to send messages in my lyrics, even my crass rapping i send out the signals about being confident and be yourself, for a mental health sufferer positiveness is a difficult word to exhibit but something you must achieve if you want to control it. i quoted you to Zoot too, comments do give you motivation bro, thanks again for your time
xstokes
xstokes 14th Mar 2024 11:45 - 2 years ago
captivating. christ paul it’s daybreak here and i been sitting all night with the cats watching the rabbits on the grass. you are absolutely haunting me out bro, this is like having company. thanks, pal.
dimestop
dimestop replied 14th Mar 2024 - 2 years ago
bro i thought Zoots believable was great add captivating to it, makes me feel like i drew gold, along with me sounding good on Manu' average ear buds, im speechless.
really to spend time alone with another artist gives me pleasure thats what we all do, headset on just you and your listen alone, to be able to deliver you to that place is what all artist want, it gives me great joy and motivation to keep going.
your company would be great to keep, the stories we could talk Mike the tales we COULD tell. keep listening my next is both expressive but powerful and sends the message, its actually a history lesson too
Zootman
Zootman 14th Mar 2024 09:44 - 2 years ago
Hey Paul, nice chill vibe on this one. Sweet lyrics, you're giving us your soft vulnerable side on this one. It sounds real, believable. Nice one bro.
dimestop
dimestop replied 14th Mar 2024 - 2 years ago
thankyou so much Chris just to read that one word believable means everything to me, all artist want to create music that others can relate to, overthinking is something a lot of people do especially those with mental health issues, and although comments are a bonus to receive and should never be expected, as deanp recently wrote me they give you motivation for an otherwise thankless task, so thanks for your motivational comment, i wrote 5 tracks in one session all to looper colleagues hence my rapid staging my next is powerful too and the message i deliver, watch out for it bro

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