Take Me Tonight - ChandelierTeardrops

hello. i like the sound and vibe of the track. the new order-y riff is cool and your vox pairs well with it. additive sounds or breaks would sound good in this, but i dig the minimalist thing this has as well.

Nice chill track. Your vox sound good to me and I don't hear anything wrong with the mix and master, though I'm definitely not an expert in that department. I'd suggest introducing some more instruments or other variation to break it up a little. That would really elevate it I think.

congrats on your first upload bro. always great to here new artists. great intro the raindrops under that guitar and then the hat on 1 and 3 were spot on. good voice. there's a wealth of knowledge here too bro your mixing/mastering will improve, im no expert only been doing it 3 years and im still learning. things like overlaying your voxs having a few different layers of vocals with different fx and tone/progression changes, clone your vocal 3 times make each one unique and add different fx to each one then blend them together in a vocal bus sidechain reverbs and delays, have backing vocals in places to harmonize pan them in from both sides helps to add character, we all think were pro's :)) and we always listen out for the little intricacies other artist use to help us learn. great introduction of yourself, welcome to the community
be extremely proud of yourself any artist who puts themselves up to be counted especially singing gets my vote

FIRST OF ALL THIS IS COOL!
There is not any basic problems on your mix and master in my view.
More so with the structure of the song.
At 3 minutes, that otherwise cool guitar theme is a bit boring.
The lack of the bass guitar or synth is serious, too.
Your voice is fantastic, you should make some background vocals for the chorus part. (Take me tonight)
And finally for the genre 'rock' this drum sound is very weak, I think.
Hope, it didn't hurt, wanted to help.
Fistbump,
Danke