Do It Right Get It Right - Eshar

20th Nov 2023 02:54 - 2 years ago
Description : I found some great royalty free vocal loops by an artist called Omar and decided to make this upbeat track.

Comments (4)

If you have time take a listen and give eshar some feedback.

kingmt77
kingmt77 2nd May 2026 07:43 - 5 months ago
eshar I hear you. You have laid down a catchy groove and that filtered bass line with the drive from the drums.YOU GOT IT RIGHT! Good job!

Mark
xstokes
xstokes 24th Nov 2023 16:01 - 2 years ago
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BaoBou
BaoBou 21st Nov 2023 10:21 - 2 years ago
There are very few songs that manage with only one chord progression. Generally you'll have one for a verse and another for a chorus; you might have a prechorus and a bridge too. In some cases an intro or outro again may have a variation.

Obviously they should all be somewhat related, and if you feel it's not necessary then you don't, it's your music after all, but listen to what your favorite artists do. Often a bit of a difference keeps the listener more interested :)
BaoBou
BaoBou 20th Nov 2023 07:20 - 2 years ago
It's very funky, so I like it! :)
The bass loop is great, but it's now everywhere throughout the track. You could consider to give the "do it right" portion a different bass (maybe a 5th lower?) or maybe the part from 1:00. That way you get a bit of breathing room for the listener.
But lovely stuff!
eshar
eshar replied 21st Nov 2023 - 2 years ago
I guess I never thought about how the bass may be a bit repetitive because of the vibe that the vocals create on the track, but thanks for listening and giving feedback.

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12th Oct 2026 22:45 - 6 hours ago
Description : Hi all... this is a little experiment i'm currently working on....
Some constructive comments are really welcome here..

Of course there is mixing still to do and drums need to be rearranged but you get the picure..

Like always just Sit Back, Relax & Enjoy....

Peace

PS.... What genre is this ??? What should it be :)
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