Description : Trying my hand at something more synthwave'y. Looking to try out adding vocals to this let me know if your intrested, will most likely replace the vowel synth. Feed back is much appreciated!
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The dissonants I mentioned are most noticeable around say 1:58-2:02. Your bass, mid and high melodies all go in a different direction, which is great in itself, but they don't play well together here. But I'll say again, it could have been something you intended, that's why I was a bit careful :)
In any case, I was mostly hoping you could build on it because the tempo and energy in that same section is excellent and I wouldn't have minded if the track would have lasted a couple minutes longer :)
This is really promising, but I also think you can make it even better.
The intro is quite long; that's not so terrible but then I also want a longer payoff.
Also there are some interesting dissonants - maybe intended, but some of them didn't play well in my mind.
In any case, you're really talented and I'm sure you can develop this one further and make it as amazing as today's track!
I seem to have a problem with long intros so ill be more careful with that when/if i work on this again. If your willing would you please point out some key areas with dissonance, thank you very much for the feed back!
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was going for a darkwave/synthwave sound, reminiscent of Justice, Carpenter Brut, Perturbator, ect.
Looking for some feed back, constructive criticisms or even just your thoughts if you liked it or not. This is just a rough cut on this current WIP, just the bones of it if you will.. If you have some cool title suggestions, would love to hear those too.
Thanks for listening.
-B
In any case, I was mostly hoping you could build on it because the tempo and energy in that same section is excellent and I wouldn't have minded if the track would have lasted a couple minutes longer :)
Good luck!!
The intro is quite long; that's not so terrible but then I also want a longer payoff.
Also there are some interesting dissonants - maybe intended, but some of them didn't play well in my mind.
In any case, you're really talented and I'm sure you can develop this one further and make it as amazing as today's track!