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25th Apr 2020 13:14 - 5 years ago
Description : I had this instru, i downloaded these vocals by Lily und Wolf here on LM, then i tried to make something.
Hope some of you will like it.
I have to select a genre, but i don't really know.

Lyrics by Jody Perrin

Comments (7)

If you have time take a listen and give ignome some feedback.

ClickbaitCabaret
ClickbaitCabaret 28th Apr 2020 16:36 - 5 years ago
This is kinda creepy. Creepy music is my area, so naturally I think this is great. Love the intro & vocal. Splendid work.
ignome
ignome replied 28th Apr 2020 - 5 years ago
Thanks, glad that you liked.
HenryPascal
HenryPascal 26th Apr 2020 03:00 - 5 years ago
Ok, i give the usual honest feedback.

Thumbs up: epic instrumental. To me is awesome just because is a typically metal atmosphere transported into electronic (or cinematic, as someone said before). Eq, balancing, final mix mastering is a pleasure for ears. Appreciated the "Save a prayer" tribute that drives to the end of track.

Closed fist: vocals are a bit neglected, i mean there are no relevant fx on. In your place i would kill a bit the mid, which are too bulky, and that encumbrance makes sometimes unintelligible the words. Then, it fits a bit of panning, crossfading with wet and dry reverb.

Thumb down: there are some parts in vocal coaching not matching with background music. They maybe could be fixed using the cheapest trick of pitch bending (it would compensate the lack of fx on it). The percussions has not so much variations, in a so long track maybe can tire the brain, which stops listening to them. For example, in the half of track, you could add a real drum beat (saturated, which is good too). The ending cames too suddenly, maybe can be fixed and improved.

In general, it is an excellent track, the defect of which, all things considered, do not affect the validity of the idea.
ignome
ignome replied 26th Apr 2020 - 5 years ago
Thanks for this honest feedback, that's what i need, even if i'm not sure i can do better.
I'll try to explain and answer you as precisely as possible (with my hard working english).

For the voices you're right, I wanted as little effect as possible, so that the voice is as comprehensible as possible, but in fact it makes it "flat" or something like that.
Also, i ever killed a bit the mid, but i have to work on it again.
You say "there are some parts in vocal coaching not matching with background music", i don't have this impression, can you tell me witch part ?

For the percussions, once again you're right, usually i try to make variations in drums, but this time i wanted something repetitive and that don't take to much place in the mix, i'll have to see that again.
And i'll try to fix the suddenly end too.

Thanks again for your time, that's really nice.
koga100
koga100 26th Apr 2020 00:43 - 5 years ago
This sound like it's straight out of a movie! BTW I would prob put the track os Cinematic. Just IMO.
ignome
ignome replied 26th Apr 2020 - 5 years ago
Thanks for your listening and your comment.
xstokes
xstokes 25th Apr 2020 18:08 - 5 years ago
Great sounds, good work with the vox. Cool mix of classic industrial touches with your own sensibility.
ignome
ignome replied 25th Apr 2020 - 5 years ago
Thanks, many voices here inspire me, even if i did the music before this time.
Thanks for these nice comments for my birthday !
HeathAlexander
HeathAlexander 25th Apr 2020 17:59 - 5 years ago
Very cool. I like the dark industrial sound. There are a lot of great sounds and sound effects. The break at 2:52 is awesome. Great track.
ignome
ignome replied 25th Apr 2020 - 5 years ago
Thanks, very much work on this to find the sound(s) i wanted.
Jinty
Jinty 25th Apr 2020 15:32 - 5 years ago
This is a really great song, well done!!!!!
ignome
ignome replied 25th Apr 2020 - 5 years ago
Thanks, glad you liked it !
BaoBou
BaoBou 25th Apr 2020 14:04 - 5 years ago
This is stunning. Great stuff, this is what makes Looperman intersting, thank you!
ignome
ignome replied 25th Apr 2020 - 5 years ago
I agree with you, many good things here, not sure to be a part of this, but thanks a lot !

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