First Try At Dnb - Kronaz

Nice one, i like the melody and beat

The rhythm of this music reminds me of the old days of my youth. Life is endless. The peace and joy of youthful life.
Danial

Ok, i like to give honest feedback, so... are you ready for bad news?

As an extenuating circumstance, it can be said that, being your first attempt, a real masterpiece could not be expected, so the so-called "errors of youth" can be forgiven to you.

Now, put yourself in the listener's shoes: if I read that the genre is Drum and Bass, at least I expect a very marked, powerful and raised drumming section. And this is the first thing that in this track, I believe has not been sufficiently developed. Also, in the first part, very fast, you limited yourself to just making a few minor changes to the percussion. But the worst thing, which definitively ruins the whole track, is that you have chosen an acoustic main theme ALWAYS THE SAME!

There is no development, there is no variation, there are no contour elements, there are no support elements to "cover" any moments of emptiness.

Translation: after repeating the loop only three times, the brain skip it and the listener's attention level drops fearfully.

Unfortunately, the second part does not save the situation, because the change of speed, applied to a main theme that is still the same and identical to itself, honestly makes you want to stop listening to it.

I hope you will forgive me for being so bad at judging your work, but I'm not the type of person who just writes trivial things like "nice song", "I like your style" just to bring into view its track.

I am sure that if you listen to your track with your eyes closed, you will find that you can improve and enrich it, you just have to be patient and work on your music.

Don't be in a hurry to release, try harder, I'm sure you can do it better.

love the old school vibe g good work