Goodbye - BlakeStringer

19th Jan 2009 06:56 - 17 years ago
Description : The 4th track off my 2nd album "Filter".

This track "Goodbye" is about the world coming to end, which is something I predicted. However, no one believed me, and here I am gloating about how they should of listened.

Any feedback would be great, as I feel like I'm improving as an artist as I create more tracks

Comments (3)

If you have time take a listen and give BlakeStringer some feedback.

Spivkurl
Spivkurl 20th Jan 2009 16:02 - 17 years ago
I'm really enjoying this track! And I feel where you're coming from. Absolutely nice work, and unique production.

>To Endtransmission : I hear what you are saying, but it's my opinion that we DO need the ego. Who is supposed to drag us all kicking and screaming into the future except for someone who KNOWS that they can do it? I just got fired for this same resistance to confidence. If you know what the future will bring and you try to change things are warn others, the problem is in the skepticism or the underlying resistance to change. Not saying you are wrong, just had to throw my opinion in.
phantomhim
phantomhim 19th Jan 2009 14:11 - 17 years ago
I have to say, you come across as arrogant, and you seem to think that your some kind of profit. You didn't predict anything, you looked at information like everyone else and came to a conclusion. The same conclusion as most other intelligent people. This IS advice for your music by the way. It's not meant to be an insult. The song is pretty good, the lyrics are not bad but involve only information that you'd hear on the news anyway. I'd dig a little deeper and really find out whats going on, then put that in your lyrics. We NEED people like you that want to get the truth about the world out, but we don't need an ego to go along with it. Also the mix needs sorting out in the vocals.

... and that's the truth mate. Keep searching, keep doing your music, and don't hate me for trying to help you and being honest. : p

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REPLY TO BELOW: ""Goodbye" is about the world coming to end, which is something I predicted. However, no one believed me, and here I am gloating about how they should of listened. Any feedback would be great, as I feel like I'm improving as an artist as I create more tracks"

I'm getting two completely different pictures here. I'm going to just leave you to it mate, the reply you just gave makes me think that you're worse than I thought in the first place. You need to learn to accept critique. The people who have slagged me off the worst in my musical path have been the ones that helped me the most.

That's all I'm going to say on this.
BlakeStringer
BlakeStringer replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thank you for this

Just to clear things up, Im taking the persona of someone who thinks the world is coming to an end (which evidently is in this case)

As for my personas arrogance, Im glad it was pointed out as I wanted him to come off that way. I believe this guy deserved to have such an ego as it was he who tried to tell these people all along that the world was ending, but they didn't listen, calling him a freak, etc

And as for the prediction, it was one as it was a vision this guy had, that the stars would fall. Now that it's too late, we see the consequences now emerge, which is being broadcasted all across the world in the news now.

Some people see songs differently to others, and that's great because they've taken the time to really divulge into the song.

I thank you for your feedback
Planetjazzbass
Planetjazzbass 19th Jan 2009 11:13 - 17 years ago
Hi Blake...this is a cool tune..I think the music though relegated to the background is a perfect vehicle for your voice..I can see your really starting to get the inflections going with theatrical nuances all over the place...this particular style with the vocals front and centre (where they belong in my opinion)really has the potential to go places...some time down the track I'd like to feature you voice with some of my music...cheers planet :)
BlakeStringer
BlakeStringer replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
wow, thank you for that review. I've always had an insecurity about my vocals, so to hear something like that is great

Love to help you out with a track of yours someday. Thank you

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