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Listen To ID 1 - Looking For Feedback Hip Hop Song By DJJomy At Looperman.com

23rd Mar 2020 16:25 - 5 years ago
Description : Looking for feedback on this unfinished song.
Thinking about asking someone to rap/sing?
Any thoughts?

Jomy, All rights reserved

Comments (4)

If you have time take a listen and give DJJomy some feedback.

RichMish
RichMish 24th Mar 2020 00:32 - 5 years ago
I agree with other commenters, low end can be cleaned up. I wasnt sure where this song was going, doesnt have much of a structure to it ( not necessarily bad ) .. The ending had more energy to it which was a nice buildup i suppose. I was looking for a heavier hip hop kick to this... Overall unique stuff and like the guitar.
SliMusic
SliMusic 23rd Mar 2020 19:43 - 5 years ago
Like the guitar work. Was it recorded?

If I had to criticize this, I think most of the low end problems are based on your drums. It has a lil' too much bass in the reverb and your guitar has too much stereo. Nice little track you made though
ClickbaitCabaret
ClickbaitCabaret 23rd Mar 2020 18:05 - 5 years ago
Kinda heavy in spots, kinda funky in others. Clean it up a bit & slap a rapper on it & It could be dope AF.
DJJomy
DJJomy replied 23rd Mar 2020 - 5 years ago
Thank you for the feedback. I will continue working on it and trying to find someone who wants to rap for me.
BeatMaker4real
BeatMaker4real 23rd Mar 2020 17:50 - 5 years ago
Sounds like it has the making of a good track..seems like right now every element has too much low end, so the mix is cloudy..and some elements needs to be balanced, I know you said it unfinished so..nice work.
DJJomy
DJJomy replied 23rd Mar 2020 - 5 years ago
Thank you for the feedback. I will continue working on it with these new insights.

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