Description : I posted on this site earlier this year, I said I was looking to get much more active with making more music.

I uploaded one a while back and got some feedback and I'd like some more feedback so I can get better.

Please let me know how it sounds, in terms of the lyrics, the melody and the delivery cause I'm working on all those.

If you have beats like these, please hmu! I need more beats like these in my life. Thank you.

Thanks!

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  1. Nous2
    Nous2 on Fri 4th Oct 2019 - 2 weeks ago

    J'aime beaucoup le refrain !! Un peu moins la chanteuse mais c'est un bon track!

  2. SiNToNiC
    SiNToNiC on Sun 29th Sep 2019 - 3 weeks ago

    Really dig this one! super chill and relaxing.
    great vocals!

  3. DijamMusic
    DijamMusic on Sun 29th Sep 2019 - 3 weeks ago

    this is a good track bro.
    Well done.
    Jamid

  4. tsochai
    tsochai on Sat 28th Sep 2019 - 3 weeks ago

    awesome work this is a crazy production i love it
    -CAP

  5. monkwee
    monkwee on Mon 23rd Sep 2019 - 4 weeks ago

    damn this is awesome man. super fun to listen to!

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed listening to it cause that's exactly how I felt after listening to the instrumental for the first time.

  6. dubjoka
    dubjoka on Mon 23rd Sep 2019 - 1 month ago

    real nice track fam

  7. thechockehold
    thechockehold on Mon 16th Sep 2019 - 1 month ago

    Awesome vocals both your and female. Beat is simple, but what you've done with it is art. Nice work keep it.

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    Thanks! Much appreciated.

  8. Format
    Format on Mon 16th Sep 2019 - 1 month ago

    You got a good formula, and the hunger. Keep improving, peace.

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    Thanks, will do.

  9. lujuju
    lujuju on Mon 16th Sep 2019 - 1 month ago

    You left, saying that I wish you happiness, just like a thief stole all my money, and also said a message, congratulations to make a fortune.

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    lol this is deep, I might need some time to decipher but thank you.

  10. RuslanG
    RuslanG on Mon 16th Sep 2019 - 1 month ago

    Nice!

  11. priest39
    priest39 on Mon 16th Sep 2019 - 1 month ago

    Awesome track and message, a fav for me, need more music like this, Larry

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    I'm really glad you liked it Larry, appreciate the fav. Thank you!

  12. vinnybee
    vinnybee on Mon 16th Sep 2019 - 1 month ago

    Your voice sounds fantastic man! I love the harmonies

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    Thanks fam, I'm really trying to work on my delivery. And yes, the harmonies are easily my favorite part of the song!

  13. crucethus
    crucethus on Mon 16th Sep 2019 - 1 month ago

    Laidback soul, I love the female background singing. sounds great!

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    Thank you, and definitely on the singing, I thought she did an excellent job.

  14. BeatMaker4real
    BeatMaker4real on Mon 16th Sep 2019 - 1 month ago

    Great job on the track bro..the melody that you created over the track is excellent, yea, you rocked that beat, and turned something simple into something special..that alone gives you a heads up on alot of folks I have heard. Good work bro.

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    Thank you man, much appreciated. The melody is definitely my favorite part of the song!

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