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Description : Hello, i'm new to beatmaking, and i need some feedback on this track, if you want to rap on it, just do, but send me the final link

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  1. iamarty
    iamarty on Tue 1st Oct 2019 - 4 years ago

    ok :)

    so since you asked for some feedback i can give you some :)

    since i dont know (accurately) what DAW you use, im going to say that you use either FL Studio or Ableton. now since i like FL Studio a lot more, im going to say you use FL Studio :)

    there are a lot of things in this track that can be improved on and made better (i.e some of the ways you did things)

    during the break at 0:23 the 808 could have been muted and the volume of the loop/vst's could have been increased to give a push into the next verse

    during the bridge at 0:38 the filter (sounds like a highpass) could have been layered with either a gross beat or love philter and made more dynamic

    the over all snare could be changed entirely and a more punchy/crispy snare could have been used but this is entirely dependent on your sample library (i.e what samples you have) if you would like any recommendations on individual sample packs, i can give you some :)

    the 808 could use a little (not too much) distortion so that it stands out a bit more because in the current state it sounds like the volume is raised not saying that thats a bad thing, but in this genre, the 808 is the main part of the track and sometimes distortion makes it stand out a lot more than what volume can do

    now lets shift our focus to the mix a bit more :)

    overall the mix is actually really clean... not the greatest, but its clean

    one way that you can really beef up your mix and make it stand out a lot more is to simply use a soft clipper maxing out the Threshold and barely increasing the Post Gain so that it stays somewhat clean while still giving off the illusion that its louder

    along the lines of that, try adding a compressor and increasing the output volume just slightly while keeping everything else untouched

    many people have very different views on how to properly mix a trap track and my mixing mentor has told me the same. everyone has different views but the main concept is almost fundamentally the same: make it louder while keeping dynamics and maintaining a clean, smooth mix

    overall, these are just my thoughts on what can be done :)

    hope you found some usefulness to this and i hope you have an absolutely beautiful day :)

  2. DijamMusic
    DijamMusic on Wed 17th Apr 2019 - 5 years ago

    Extremely well put together.
    Well done.

    Grozzou
    Reply by Grozzou

    Thanks a lot dude!

  3. AztroBeatsYT
    AztroBeatsYT on Wed 17th Apr 2019 - 5 years ago

    This is hard!!!! Start posting on youtube if you haven't already!

    Grozzou
    Reply by Grozzou

    I am waiting to improve a bit to post on yt, but thanks a lot dude ;)

  4. CLearVision
    CLearVision on Wed 17th Apr 2019 - 5 years ago

    kill it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Grozzou
    Reply by Grozzou

    Thanks bro! :)

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