Listen To Same Blood Different Bloodstreams Part2 Hip Hop Song By Jobantwisp | Looperman

Agree with RichMich... more emphasis!!!

Not bad. The beat was pretty unique. I enjoyed it. Your vocals are still super muffled and hard to hear. If your going with that lo-fi sound, thats fine, i would perhaps boost some high end frequencies in the E.Q. to bring out some clarity.
Also from a rap perspective, the flow is fine, but the delivery could use some work. Delivery aka how you deliver your rap. Kinda one-tone, and doesnt change at all throughout the song. Just a couple things to think about! Hit me up if you want further assistance! Keep it up

Yeah man, so much better than before, but there are further improvement you still can do. For example, it is still hard to understand the verses you declare, and, once again, the low frequencies of the voice are still too strong. Very nice the transceiver effect, however it still makes the lyrics unintelligible. Try this: insert the (same) vocal track on multiple patterns in the rack, for each of these apply different filters, enhancing the mid-high frequencies and cutting off the low ones. Then play them all together and in the mixer you can adjust the volumes on each track, until you find a better sound! If you don't want to do it on the entire song, you can treat the voice within another project, when you're satisfied with the result, export, then add it to the instrumental.