Same Blood Different Bloodstreams Part1 - Jobantwisp

3rd Apr 2019 20:55 - 7 years ago
Description : my first rap,,lemme know whutcha think,if you're down,, used a free app for the lyrics

Comments (2)

If you have time take a listen and give jobantwisp some feedback.

RichMish
RichMish 3rd Apr 2019 23:35 - 7 years ago
The lyrics are pretty good, and flows not bad for your first song ever. Obviously the quality of the song is pretty rough, but that will come in time. Your vocals are muffled. Sounds like you need a new condenser mic. But keep me in mind if you need an engineer to mix and master your tracks. Shoot me an email. Peace and keep it up
jobantwisp
jobantwisp replied 4th Apr 2019 - 7 years ago
thankye muchly yea iz rough,using a free app will do,tho,much appreciated
HenryPascal
HenryPascal 3rd Apr 2019 21:50 - 7 years ago
Totally agree with Alien! I really like the music, the final mix/mastering... something to fix. Maybe you got no money for a mic, but for sure you can apply fix and tricks on vocals before put on mix, do you? My tip: add a filter to cut the lowest frequencies (your voice is too low), then add a 4:1 compression (to balance the waveform) then add a dynamic volume envelopment all the track long (to make the vocal track more intelligible and to ensure that it does not bury or be buried by the music in the background) and, optional, some weird effect (like the one used all the vocals long in "Your Woman" by White Town.)

Try these, then let me know.
jobantwisp
jobantwisp replied 3rd Apr 2019 - 7 years ago
ll check em out,,much appreciated

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