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Tags : | Hip Hop | 4.95 MB | Studio One

Description : my first rap,,lemme know whutcha think,if you're down,, used a free app for the lyrics

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  1. RichMish
    RichMish on Wed 3rd Apr 2019 - 5 years ago

    The lyrics are pretty good, and flows not bad for your first song ever. Obviously the quality of the song is pretty rough, but that will come in time. Your vocals are muffled. Sounds like you need a new condenser mic. But keep me in mind if you need an engineer to mix and master your tracks. Shoot me an email. Peace and keep it up

    jobantwisp
    Reply by jobantwisp

    thankye muchly yea iz rough,using a free app will do,tho,much appreciated

  2. HenryPascal
    HenryPascal on Wed 3rd Apr 2019 - 5 years ago

    Totally agree with Alien! I really like the music, the final mix/mastering... something to fix. Maybe you got no money for a mic, but for sure you can apply fix and tricks on vocals before put on mix, do you? My tip: add a filter to cut the lowest frequencies (your voice is too low), then add a 4:1 compression (to balance the waveform) then add a dynamic volume envelopment all the track long (to make the vocal track more intelligible and to ensure that it does not bury or be buried by the music in the background) and, optional, some weird effect (like the one used all the vocals long in "Your Woman" by White Town.)

    Try these, then let me know.

    jobantwisp
    Reply by jobantwisp

    ll check em out,,much appreciated

  3. Alien
    Alien on Wed 3rd Apr 2019 - 5 years ago

    Oh great track, good job on the melody and beat as well as the choice of instruments.
    The vocals are good but aren't mixed in properly in the track. It needs more presence. imho
    So I would work on that :)
    Great job though.

    Alien.

    jobantwisp
    Reply by jobantwisp

    thankye,'m trying,,no funds for a mic so using an app lol

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