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  1. theanscenic
    theanscenic on Thu 2nd Aug 2018 - 1 month ago
    will share for sure its a banger! this is the song for your schools talent show tho for real lmao you will blow up in your school! Also a lot of your music sounds like X and ski mask etc but there are a few tracks here and there like this one and End up dead. You should focus on that sound more man its dope! And its the new wave too, melodic emo trap is the way dude!
  2. theanscenic
    theanscenic on Thu 26th Jul 2018 - 2 months ago
    send me the spotify/soundcloud for sure man
    Reply by sunnydas01 Check it out :)
    share it with ppl if you can
  3. OcsiProx
    OcsiProx on Sat 14th Jul 2018 - 2 months ago
    Omg this is so cool man, that dope
  4. theanscenic
    theanscenic on Fri 13th Jul 2018 - 2 months ago
    So I listened to this a bit more in the car etc. This is all my opinion and I am just a regular dude so I may be wrong and its your song in the end but these are my thoughts:
    1. The vocals seem to be missing depth. Like something with the EQing. They sound a little tinny? idk if that's the right word to use.
    2. I love the part at one point where you added vocals in a lower pitch around 1:35. It was one of those moments when you get goosebumps from a track.
    3. The producers tag is a bit annoying more than once. maybe take out the BEAAAAAAAAATS after the first time
    4. you could switch up to one of the drops if you cut off the music for a bit. For example at 1:16 it would have been dope for the beat to stop and you to go "aye, aye" and then it drops again. Or if you stopped the beat like at the end of the track and then came in with the drop.
    5. You could add a bit of a singing "yeeaaah" here and there for example at the end after the hook the last time at like 1:56. It just makes it filled out. Just general adlib type of things here and there if that makes any sense lmao I am trash at explaining anything because I dont really know much.

    Of course this is really nitpicking but I listened to the track in my car a lot because I actually do really like it and was just offering all my thoughts on it. And you're only 16 man I wish I was that good right now, let alone at 16 lmao!
    Reply by sunnydas01 Thank you so much for the help man im making the changes rn.
    This really helped out dude ill send you the final link if you want when its done.
    Probably spotify and soundcloud in a week or 2
  5. theills312
    theills312 on Thu 12th Jul 2018 - 2 months ago
  6. syrupdoeslofi
    syrupdoeslofi on Thu 12th Jul 2018 - 2 months ago
    This is absolutely on fire duh... Maan, I began as a producer and... Whoah, this is definitely a level I wanna get on..
  7. Arloph09
    Arloph09 on Thu 12th Jul 2018 - 2 months ago
  8. EightyEightt
    EightyEightt on Thu 12th Jul 2018 - 2 months ago
    Nice man, enjoyed it a lot
    FAMOUR on Thu 12th Jul 2018 - 2 months ago
    Man this sounds great, really well prod bruh.
  10. baconmustard
    baconmustard on Thu 12th Jul 2018 - 2 months ago
    bro just keep on workin hard
  11. VadVid
    VadVid on Thu 12th Jul 2018 - 2 months ago
    Fire, I like the instrumental selection and the way your cadence and flow match it. Only thing I would say is, well idk if you changed the pitch but if you did be sure to turn on preserve formants, because right now there is a robotic sound to your voice. If that doesn't work I would say go into an equalizer and bring up those mids, to try and keep the natural sound. But ay its still fire.
    Reply by sunnydas01 Theres just a little pitch correction but I think the robotic effect might be from the microphone being a bit busted lol... but thanks for the feedback!!
  12. theanscenic
    theanscenic on Thu 12th Jul 2018 - 2 months ago
    This is dope! The beat and vocals, melody everything is on point. I don't have a good ear tho im just a trap bro lol
    Reply by sunnydas01 Thanks man!!
  13. AxelZ
    AxelZ on Wed 11th Jul 2018 - 2 months ago
    This is dope!

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Broken hearts lead to open scars
That’s why I’m bleeding out
Lock away my feelings behind bars
That’s why I’m breaking out
Girl I know it’s on your mind
Why can’t we last long
I know I’m not being kind
Cuz of things going on

Hidden figures in my mind
Haunting me all the time
Making me lose my mind
Do I want to be alive

broke your trust
Ate your dust
You must think I’m here cuz lust
You can leave yea if you must
But I didn’t come to you just because
Hold me down when I’m messed up
Always helping my come up
can’t stand the fact that I take advantage of your constant love

Broken hearts lead to open scars
That’s why I’m bleeding out
Lock away my feelings behind bars
That’s why I’m breaking out
Girl I know it’s on your mind
Why can’t we last long
I know I’m not being kind
Cuz of things going on



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