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Description : Second part of 'Tell Me' that released on my new EP "One Life Later" out now everywhere
hope you enjoy
thanks for your time
-CAP

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  1. Th3Coalition
    Th3Coalition on Sat 22nd Dec 2018 - 5 years ago

    im loving the vibe of this ...u rode that beat too..yessir

    tsochai
    Reply by tsochai

    thank you G
    glad you enjoy my man
    preciate you always comin by showin love!
    -CAP

  2. mildperil
    mildperil on Fri 21st Dec 2018 - 5 years ago

    I might have said this before, but you really remind me of Doctor Octogan.

    Love the tune, and the message, it's something we can all relate to at one point or another.

    And this is so much better to my ears than commercial gangster rap as well, could quite happily listen to a full album of yours. Keep up the good work my friend, and thanks for sharing :)

    tsochai
    Reply by tsochai

    Yknow , Ive never heard a Dr. Octagon track
    regardless really means a lot - you coming out showing support and im really glad you enjoyed the track
    im working on new music, got a couple projects out but im trying to put a new one together to capture my sound better
    thank you so much peril
    cheers
    -CAP

  3. mrwolf14
    mrwolf14 on Wed 19th Dec 2018 - 5 years ago

    I am no hip-hop (nor rap, nor trap for that matter) expert.
    Still, I really enjoyed the song.
    Maybe if you want make it more "commercial" (whatever this means) the advice from CentralsDev and Danke is a good one: you need a solid chorus. Which you should also highlight with a change (uplift) in the beat IMHO.
    Also, your beat would benefit from a bit more "motion" in the bass-line.
    Good flow.
    Overall, as I said, I really enjoyed the song.
    Keep the good work.
    Ciao, Domenico

    tsochai
    Reply by tsochai

    Hey Wolf, Really appreciate you coming out leaving me some feedback
    Glad you enjoyed the song - definitely taking all the suggestions here into consideration.
    But as this song is relatively older, I have a lot of tracks out since this one that I would love to get your advice on as well, thanks alot for your time.
    much love
    -CAP

  4. ronabo
    ronabo on Wed 19th Dec 2018 - 5 years ago

    Hey Tsochai, The chords are nice. I like the muted guitar that comes in and out of the track. Your rap is cool too... I dig the message. Keep it up!

    Ronabo

    tsochai
    Reply by tsochai

    Much love Ronabo.
    Simple life I maintain.
    Thanks for comin out showing some love on the track , one of my favorite tracks I produced.
    Glad you enjoy, more to come, thanks.
    -CAP

  5. Danke
    Danke on Mon 17th Dec 2018 - 5 years ago

    hey there

    hip hop is another story for me...I took a listen and said: well, it's fine enough for an enjoying listen...I think centralsdev showed a good point that from 0.10- 0.30 could be the chorus of the song...if you would confirm that part with another two vocal lines or extra keys, it would not be bad...

    handshake, Danke

    tsochai
    Reply by tsochai

    thanks a lot Danke for giving some criticism
    that feature buttom really does put my songs out there - was an old song that I featured to get more feedback on - glad it works
    thanks alot Danke
    advice well heard
    cheers
    -CAP

  6. DjLeeMFW
    DjLeeMFW on Mon 17th Dec 2018 - 5 years ago

    great beat and hook, your an awesome story teller. A all the way!!

    tsochai
    Reply by tsochai

    Much appreciated Leo
    been really contemplating a track of a story. fictional or not, we'll see.
    thanks for showin love
    cheers
    -CAP

  7. centralsdev
    centralsdev on Sun 16th Dec 2018 - 5 years ago

    i mean if you had keep it the flow from the hook it would had been a hit. keep up the good work.

    tsochai
    Reply by tsochai

    i feel it man.
    thanks for the criticism, will definitely take that into consideration - the flow of this track.
    hope you can enjoy some of my other work in the mean time
    thanks dev
    -CAP

  8. Alien
    Alien on Sun 16th Dec 2018 - 5 years ago

    Good work cap, I like the lyrics! Dope ;)
    Maybe try to sing it slightly differently. Not my windsight though... ;) I am def. no singer lol.

    Much love!

    Alien

    tsochai
    Reply by tsochai

    Thanks so much Alien.
    Showing love on an oldertrack is still appreciated im glad youre listening!
    Advice definitely taken!
    thanks my man
    -CAP

  9. centralsdev
    centralsdev on Sat 15th Dec 2018 - 5 years ago

    hello there if you ask if you keep it the flow from 0:10 to 0:18
    it would had been a hit keep up the good work.

    tsochai
    Reply by tsochai

    its the hook i continue it through out the track but i think i understand what you mean
    preciate the feedback, dev
    thanks
    -CAP

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