Tags : | Spoken Word | 3.46 MB

Description : Spoken word - melodic talking - redneck hiphop - dubpop - I dunno. This song is part of "The Love Offensive" where I'm writing a bunch of simple, direct songs around the theme of more love, less hate. Just going with the flow of my natural weirdness. Orchestration is 5 loops from rmce, thedarkflamemaster, bosni, rasputin1963 and blackmansta10. Please let me know what you think.

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  1. Angelusyeux777SC
    Angelusyeux777SC on Fri 21st Jun 2019 - 2 years ago

    I'm kinda getting a Johnny Cash vibe from this, great listening here indeed, very creative.

    Reply by CitizenMofo

    Thank you, sweetcherries. Johnny Cash is ok by me. I very much appreciate your feedback.

  2. BigAlDente
    BigAlDente on Sun 4th Mar 2018 - 4 years ago

    This is an excellent Spoken Word track. It sounds like a raw reflection of what's just under the emotional surface, and I think that's what Spoken Word should be about. I can almost hear a Johnny Cash cadence that just makes it even more enjoyable to listen to. Thanks for posting this.

    Reply by CitizenMofo

    Thanks for listening and commenting, BigAlDente. I always wonder if I should ever get out the chainsaw voice or just leave it in the garage with all the other useless junk, and your encouragement means a lot to me. Thank you!

  3. MGproduct
    MGproduct on Sun 25th Feb 2018 - 4 years ago

    I always love the unique and difference whatever it is ... but its something special.

    Reply by CitizenMofo

    As do I. Thank you, MGproduct, for the listen and the encouragement. As you know, it always means so much.

  4. silverman
    silverman on Sat 24th Feb 2018 - 4 years ago

    I really like this.
    I can imagine my favourite artist of all time (Tom Waits) doing this.
    Sounds excellent.
    The only bit I'm not keen on is the tantrum toward the end ... I've lost nothing!Nothing nothing nothing!
    Doesn't suit the very emotional and masculine vibe.

    Reply by CitizenMofo

    Thank you, silverman. Please tell Mr. Tom to give me a call, he can sing it all day if he wants. I will consider that tantrum at the end and probably give that part another go for a little different vibe there. I appreciate the feedback a lot. Thank you!

  5. Metabolic
    Metabolic on Sat 24th Feb 2018 - 4 years ago

    I'd be interested to hear this again if you do any tweaking, so let me know if you do :)

  6. Metabolic
    Metabolic on Sat 24th Feb 2018 - 4 years ago

    Weird... Original... New genre right here?

    I don't know what to think of this.

    I like it.

    "Nothing, nothing, nothing" I would add some fx as is fades.

    "I've lost nothing" I'd add a big single kick/boom just after that, i'd fit somewhere around 2:00, in my head it sounds reverberated.

    I think a few "cinematic" addition would make this much more.

    Reply by CitizenMofo

    Hi Metabolic, thank you for your listen and feedback. I like your ideas and I'll mess around with it some more. New genre? It's just stuff I like to do, and then I wonder if anyone else will like it or just think it's weird, or even think it's music, so I'm very glad to hear that you like it. I'll let you know when I post a new draft. Thanks again.

  7. Discipline
    Discipline on Sat 24th Feb 2018 - 4 years ago

    Well this is certainly different - in a good way. The vocal put me in mind of some of Ry Cooder's most recent stuff. I like it.

    Reply by CitizenMofo

    Thank you, Discipline. If I could sound just a little like Ry, that would be ok with me. I'm glad you like this one and I very much appreciate your comment.

  8. KatanaInMyHands
    KatanaInMyHands on Fri 23rd Feb 2018 - 4 years ago

    Listen please

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