Description : I need you here.... and some feedback
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I've been going around analyzing various samples for their notations to learn on piano and in the process grabbed a snippet of the intro for this song. Can you actually play this song on piano with only two hands? I couldn't manage it because the notes were so spread out.
Anyway
On a more reflective note, I found the melody perfect, the composure and structure is amazing because of how it builds up to the final chorus and Chris Scott's voice has an immaculate impact.
The only issue is that the lyrics themselves are very repetitive and don't really express the concept with an attractive attitude. The language used portrays a very blunt diction which degrades the emotive quality of the piece.
For example "you'll be standing where I gaze" is repeated many times despite the fact that it does not contribute much to the emotive quality of the piece. I advise that you study various poetical techniques to gain an understanding of how to make the lyrics in your songs to evoke a significant emotional response from the listener.
Description : Feel free to check out the video on YT as well (Alan McLaren Project - Upside Down) of this 6min journey from electronic to rock with some psychedelic moments...
This is my latest, but also one of my earliest tracks.... any feedback is more than welcome, thanks :)
Description : 'The main point of this song is really about the frustrations of living in the overload of today's World of Tech. The consequences are impaired communication and that if you advance too far you end up diminishing what you had to start with, so you are way worse off.' Enjoy a 60s Rhythm with a modern deep Bass, a Sitar, a Piano from EvilPianist, a lost flute from UniverseHuston and some Oscillators :-)
If you like our work, please find us under kayos2 on Bandcamp
Description : A demo of one of my current projects. The chorus vocal sounds like "Aaaaraashe" to me. The song is in C# minor with a nod to C# pythagorean on the chorus. The beat on the verse was inspired by the Peter Gabriel song Intruder.
Description : This is one of my earliest productions that I did at the start of my recording career. I did not have a keyboard at the time I made this song, so I improvised and used my sister's iPad and a 5 dollar GarageBand application instead, and plugged the headset jack into into my PT6 rig and did my best to turn each individual track (which were mono and there were about 25 tracks or so) into a stereo image. Then recorded vocals over it. My computer was so old and slow that I had to mix my music and then BOUNCE it to a new session - four times. My computer (which had 512 MB RAM and an 80 GB hard drive) couldn't handle more than 8 tracks at a time or it'd stop working because the processor couldn't handle it. Took me FOREVER to do. But I got it done. Had a lot of fun doing it too, even if it isn't my "best" work. I'm still happy with it, considering I didn't have many tools to choose from at the time.
Description : Long time lurker first time poster, pretty new to production n stuff, this is my first track in Ableton Live.
was going for a darkwave/synthwave sound, reminiscent of Justice, Carpenter Brut, Perturbator, ect.
Looking for some feed back, constructive criticisms or even just your thoughts if you liked it or not. This is just a rough cut on this current WIP, just the bones of it if you will.. If you have some cool title suggestions, would love to hear those too.
Thanks for listening.
-B
Anyway
On a more reflective note, I found the melody perfect, the composure and structure is amazing because of how it builds up to the final chorus and Chris Scott's voice has an immaculate impact.
The only issue is that the lyrics themselves are very repetitive and don't really express the concept with an attractive attitude. The language used portrays a very blunt diction which degrades the emotive quality of the piece.
For example "you'll be standing where I gaze" is repeated many times despite the fact that it does not contribute much to the emotive quality of the piece. I advise that you study various poetical techniques to gain an understanding of how to make the lyrics in your songs to evoke a significant emotional response from the listener.
I guess i have a long way to go to do something this good.
Ahh the birds at the end, nice touch mate!
Blessings - Billy.