Need You Here Feat Chris Scott - 7venth12

I've been going around analyzing various samples for their notations to learn on piano and in the process grabbed a snippet of the intro for this song. Can you actually play this song on piano with only two hands? I couldn't manage it because the notes were so spread out.
Anyway
On a more reflective note, I found the melody perfect, the composure and structure is amazing because of how it builds up to the final chorus and Chris Scott's voice has an immaculate impact.

The only issue is that the lyrics themselves are very repetitive and don't really express the concept with an attractive attitude. The language used portrays a very blunt diction which degrades the emotive quality of the piece.

For example "you'll be standing where I gaze" is repeated many times despite the fact that it does not contribute much to the emotive quality of the piece. I advise that you study various poetical techniques to gain an understanding of how to make the lyrics in your songs to evoke a significant emotional response from the listener.

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Wow. This is very very good. I really your sound. Good stuff man.

This track is amazing and so well composed.
I guess i have a long way to go to do something this good.
Ahh the birds at the end, nice touch mate!

Blessings - Billy.

Damn! This is too good! :D