The Chronicles Part II Take II - Wordybum

12th Aug 2015 00:09 - 11 years ago
Description : a better vocal mix, the beat is by stephskillie

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/169044

I'm still looking for some feedback on the vocal mix.

Comments (6)

If you have time take a listen and give wordybum some feedback.

PriorityBeats
PriorityBeats 16th Aug 2015 16:15 - 11 years ago
this is dope man! the mix is clear as well
wordybum
wordybum replied 20th Aug 2015 - 11 years ago
thanks so much for the feedback and the listen. this truly was a great track to work on.

bless.
ballhousebeats
ballhousebeats 15th Aug 2015 12:49 - 11 years ago
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mudhoen
mudhoen 15th Aug 2015 08:37 - 11 years ago
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MisterBloodworth
MisterBloodworth 15th Aug 2015 06:44 - 11 years ago
Wow man! Great instrumentation and powerful lyrics. Really liking this. The vocals are very clear and balanced greatly. From 4:29 and onward, there's no sound for me, though I'm sure it's intentional. Not sure. This has happened before with other's tracks. Nevertheless, great job man!

~GO
wordybum
wordybum replied 15th Aug 2015 - 11 years ago
thanks! i really appreciate the listen.

i think it was just you on the playback. mine ended right on time.

again, Thanks so much.
StrikingDaggers
StrikingDaggers 12th Aug 2015 18:05 - 11 years ago
Dope track wordybum! Stephskillie came through with a ill beat and you lyrically delivered the heat! Your vocals sound a little lower in the beginning of your 1st verse compared to the rest of the track. Other then that the vocal mix sounds on point. But that's just my opinion. This one's a Fav. Nice work.
wordybum
wordybum replied 15th Aug 2015 - 11 years ago
good, looks Shatner! i really had a good time spitting over this one.
Klandestyne
Klandestyne 12th Aug 2015 12:28 - 11 years ago
ez man , in my humble opinion ur vox sounds top notch m8
really clear n the mix when the synth join up kinda get a bit quieter but nothing major
u have a strong delivery
and im not sure how it could be improved to be honest

peace ski
klandestyne
wordybum
wordybum replied 15th Aug 2015 - 11 years ago
thanks for the feedback! i really appreciate you taking the time to check it out.

bless

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