Oarmens Sky Demo - MGproduct

4th Aug 2015 05:05 - 11 years ago
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Description : Hi Everybody This Track is Between Pop And Acoustic
I Think This is Nice And Beautiful Track With Memorable Melody That I Made
I Upload It And I Need Your Tips To Make Better Tracks All In FL Studio Daw
Hope U Happy Meteors MG 2015

Comments (3)

If you have time take a listen and give MGproduct some feedback.

Mosaic
Mosaic 8th Sep 2016 13:29 - 10 years ago
Hey mate

Nice track, agree with Spiv about the guitar and piano, but did see your response in a reply so look forward to hearing it then if you up load here onto the loop, apart from that track sound very good indeed...fav...peace mosaic...
DijamMusic
DijamMusic 4th Aug 2015 18:08 - 11 years ago
MG
Hello my friend,
Your track is a brilliant track.
From 0:48 it is fantastic.
If I was you I would take the section from0:48 to 1:02 out.
Then join the track, I believe it would be a lot better.
Please don’t be put off this is my personal take on it.
Thanks and well done.
Jamid
MGproduct
MGproduct replied 5th Aug 2015 - 11 years ago
Hey Jamid
You Are Very precise
Thank For Your Fantastic Opinion

5 Aug 2015 ( IN IRAN : 14 Mordad 1394 , 8:13 AM )

MG
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 4th Aug 2015 16:22 - 11 years ago
Well, the composition is pretty nice overall. I guess my best tip is that you use a real guitar and/or piano, since your profile states that you play both of them. The sample based composition is quite choppy, and guitar is one of the instruments which is least believable as a sampled instrument (at least to my ears). Like I said, the writing is good, it just needs to be brought to life.
MGproduct
MGproduct replied 4th Aug 2015 - 11 years ago
Yes I Play Both Of Them ( Guitar And Piano ) But Its Demo Track And I Wanna Record The Melodies With Real Guitar And Piano , Thanks For Your Precious tips Spivkurl
If U Can , Plz Help Me On My Other Track ( Peace Of East Elves)
With Addres : http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/169202

MG
4 Aug 2015 8 : 05

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