Description : Heard Beatz's vocal take on the track and began writing to it myself. Saw he had the instro uploaded and the rest is history.

Leave a comment on what aspects of the track you like, don't, what tweaks you'd have made etc.

Shout to Beatz for some dope production!

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  1. Th3Coalition
    Th3Coalition on Sun 14th Jun 2015 - 7 years ago

    @BEATZMODE and @donfons ...I want to put this on my mixtape I'm working on called VINDICATION...I want it to be the first track...n @donfons ...I want it as a collab with your verse...so let me know how we can go about this..n what legal issues need to be handled.. Preciate it

    donfons
    Reply by donfons

    Just messaged you fam. Good looks on the listen I appreciate it!

  2. DMindProductions
    DMindProductions on Sat 11th Apr 2015 - 7 years ago

    Digging it!

    donfons
    Reply by donfons

    Thanks for listening! I truly appreciate it!

  3. centralsdev
    centralsdev on Sat 11th Apr 2015 - 7 years ago

    you loss the flow some times.

  4. Oceanically
    Oceanically on Fri 10th Apr 2015 - 7 years ago

    A catchy tune. Good lyrics :) Well done.

    donfons
    Reply by donfons

    Thank you for the listen and comments.

  5. centralsdev
    centralsdev on Fri 10th Apr 2015 - 7 years ago

    if you could keep that flow that is at 0:32 to 0:36 and just keep all the way on the main part and make like two main parts and a nice chorus that goes betiwn.

    donfons
    Reply by donfons

    I've been brainstorming some ways to extend this to a fully featured track for another project I have coming up. I will definitely consider this approach!

    Thanks for listening and your comments.

  6. YungWillCPR
    YungWillCPR on Mon 30th Mar 2015 - 7 years ago

    I like the delivery on this one..clarity and production z great. A+ for me.

    donfons
    Reply by donfons

    Much appreciated Yung. Just left a comment of your track "life..."

    You remind of this other cat on here Thatruth1 (His joint "black and ugly" features the stacking effect I was mentioning). Anyways, thanks for listening and commenting!

  7. SHWAK
    SHWAK on Wed 25th Mar 2015 - 7 years ago

    1st time it sounds off to me is at the lebron line

    those words just need some more spacing

    maybe replace it with "gunna bitch slap lebron next" then the beat stops. * WHAP * beat starts again

    solid vocals

    donfons
    Reply by donfons

    What did the 5 fingers say to the face???

    Thanks S.

  8. benjizo
    benjizo on Mon 9th Mar 2015 - 7 years ago

    Good joint...Love the flow.The delivery is on point.

    donfons
    Reply by donfons

    Thanks Benj! I'm feeling a lot of your joints. One of these days we'll have to make a collab happen.

  9. JoeyBonezSD1
    JoeyBonezSD1 on Fri 6th Mar 2015 - 7 years ago

    love the flows an delivery..this a nice joint right here beat bangs mixed an mastered well...good show...

    donfons
    Reply by donfons

    Thank you, thank you, thank you! This is one of my better mixes. I'm constantly looking to surpass this one.

  10. BigBodyStylus
    BigBodyStylus on Sat 28th Feb 2015 - 7 years ago

    Fresh Oxy-Morons... Dope shit kid!!!

    donfons
    Reply by donfons

    I'm glad you feeling it fam. Thanks for listening!

  11. DeLaBeatz
    DeLaBeatz on Thu 12th Feb 2015 - 7 years ago

    Pretty dope bro. Good vocal mix. Keep it up.

    donfons
    Reply by donfons

    Thanks for listening fam. Much appreciated!

  12. BEATZMODE
    BEATZMODE on Sun 12th Oct 2014 - 7 years ago

    awesome stuff bro,im liking what you did,keep it up

    donfons
    Reply by donfons

    BEATZ I appreciate you checking in bro! Thanx for listening. I'll be checking your page regularly for any heat you put out!

  13. larrybarrow31
    larrybarrow31 on Sun 12th Oct 2014 - 7 years ago

    catchy flow, very nice work on this, I had to add it to fav. nice job!

    donfons
    Reply by donfons

    I appreciate the listen and fav. Much respect!!

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