Revitalizing Expressions - AviatOfficial

OK. Sorry, I understand you’ve got other things to do. It’s just frustrating sometimes when people don’t reply to quite detailed reviews. Or just reply with “Thanks for the comment”.

I’ve been trying to make a mental note of who it’s perhaps not worth giving a detailed review to. And a couple of people wouldn’t get a track review from me ever again after being far too rude, in very different ways.

Anyway, thanks for the review praise. I take my comments seriously and try to give appreciation for the hard work and passion that people have put in. Exactly what I do with my own music on a daily basis.

I’m not able to listen to the track right now (technical reasons) but will try to suggest something for the drums later, as this is a very important part of a track like this.

But it’s good work and you’ve got some interesting melodies and movement out of the main lead that I think goes a bit Celtic at times.

Hi. Solid beat to kick things off then some gentle pad work.

0:16 vowel melody sounds a bit odd. Just the sound, not the notes.

0:24 sound is much better.

0:39 new instrument that is a bit guitar-like in low notes I do like. Though you could maybe add a bit of quantise to give it more natural groove and feel. Sometimes it sounds a bit mediaeval, Celtic or folk.

It's a good sound and definitely a lot of movement in there so I can see why you find it very touching and revitalizing.

Nice conclusion and I think this works quite well at this length.

I think you could improve the drums so I might give some more detail if you reply to this. I don't think you always reply to my track reviews and suggestions.