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Has a cool tempo, some added flavour will change some of the dynamics
that are lacking...
Sounds like you had fun doing...Over all solid mix cool track...

This isn't what i was expecting. This is leaning more towards chill out than drum and bass. this is what drum and bass sounds like https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/155362
The lyrics and the singing are nice and it's a pretty good track but i was expecting something more upbeat.
You should alter the genre.
FR

You are always very productive and I can see that you have tried to capture the idea you had into music very quickly too.

I was expecting more heavy drums and basses but this one is quite soft and subtle. I would try to bring the vocals down especially on the male. Other than that keep on being creative. Blessings - B.

I would be interested in listening to a version of this with out the male vocals. And maybe with a synth or guitar lead over this sound. The chord progressions are nice. The choices of synths are excellent. reminds me a bit of a throwa away song from Roxy Music called Always Unknowing. the vocals are not needed for this tune at all..
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2w2SHKuEwJs&html5=1

BTW I make these comments as a fellow colleague. You have done an amazing job at refining your looping abilities and I am impressed at how much you have improved since I first heard your early work. Don't ever stop!!
Steve

Fine work for only 3 hours.

First complaint: can you remove the sound of him opening his mouth at 0:08? And anywhere else the same thing happens.

Not sure I'd call this d'n'b but I can see why you've put it there. I actually really like the drums. Those main hits are a type of drum sound I don't seem to have but would like to use.

Piano chords hold it all nicely together but the drums are kind of the star.

Are the male vocals at all detuned? I like the sound of them but they have a slightly unnatural quality that makes them distinctive. I can only think they've been detuned a bit.

This has a good, lazy, dreamy vibe to it and I can also hear your sort of style in it (hard as that is to exactly describe).

Might give more detail later but that will do for now.

Sounds great! - think you can lose the intro and start at about:30. Love the background choruses (airy chants)not sure what to call them- they are very effective. I hear a little Indian vibe in this 1:06 and 4:04. Very restrained and the production values are quite good. Loved the break at 3:59. I have a fairly unreserved love for this one. You have a signature style which I think comes through very effectively with this track.
Much respect.
-clindsay