Description : Hey guys and girls, its been a long time, but im back...somewhat colleg eis rough ...anyways this track is uncertain to me so i was wondering if i could get some feedback as to whether or not its good or not. Please be honest, i would appreciate CC, if not that's OK! I'm really considering restarting the song but with the same sounds, just different melodies. :) thank you so much!
God Bless
Synergex...Steve
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Great instrumentation and a very interesting track. Enjoyed the listen. I assure you, I meant interesting in the most positive sense. In this case it was making me think about doing sometime in a similar vein.
All The Best for the Holiday Season to You and Your Loved Ones
May the New Year be Your Best Ever
"Interesting" can be taken many ways. ;)
But yea thanks man this isn't my best or latest so don't expect so much from them :)
I'll hit a tune up of yours!
Thanks,
Steve
thansk bruv, thats exactly what i did, and look i've progressed. ust goes to prove that practise (even if you don't know where it'll take you) can help you improve :D
keep your skills up!
God Bless
Steve
why thank you my dear friend... but...no critical comments? lol jk i appreciate the positivity, and im glad you enjoyed it (i did making it ^.^)
have a good one,
God Bless
Steve
haha thanks Churdosh, thats really kind of you, the beat...actually almost all the tracks i compose (except for a lot of my older tracks) i actually make the different instruments by combining them with other kicks, hi hats, snares etc, to make my own unique beat/sound. So yes the beat is mine and it fits rather well lol.
Thanks you agaiN!
God Bless!
Steve
crazy stuff the effects are insane, once again spotless production and great arrangement, keep it up. these guys are wrong about the melody. it works great with this track, i think adds a very melodic scary tone to the song.
lol i think i changed it, honestly i don't even know any longer, it's been a long 4 months of college, it's all a big burr lol Thanks for so much for your review, but i was not expecting scary haha
God Bless
Steve
yeah man i agree about the melodies, i like the drums and the pace but the melodies sound a bit cheesy if you know what i mean, i dunno how to explain, but i think less of a 'plucked' sound would be better. dont get me wrong it sounds good, youre probably your own biggest critic, but if your going to change it i think all it really needs is a rework of the melodies.
oh i know what you mean man, lol almost like what a kids show would use on a weak dance track? lol thanks a lot haha jk
preciate the love
God Bless
steve
I liked this
sorry I listened 2 it yesterday and couldnt post my review
the melodies make it bouncy and while that doesnt always suit DnB, its not a bad thing anyway
well done
Trax
wow its been a really long time since i replied to my reviews, but thanks for checking this out. So a lil "attack" and and more slowing melody, gutcha!
Thanks mate!
God Bles
Steve
It's cool it's great the melodies are perfect but i think that they don't fit with the drums(drums are too heavy for em)That they get "lost" inside the mix
yea thats what i thought as well, about the melodies...one of the reasons im thinking of redoing it... although the people i've shown it to (most) have said dont change it. But i dont know i think i will just to see if i can improve it in any way... if thats possible :)
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All The Best for the Holiday Season to You and Your Loved Ones
May the New Year be Your Best Ever
John
But yea thanks man this isn't my best or latest so don't expect so much from them :)
I'll hit a tune up of yours!
Thanks,
Steve
dont redo, just start another!
-B-
keep your skills up!
God Bless
Steve
i loove it
have a good one,
God Bless
Steve
beat is great(your own or sample?)i like that little(speech)
"yeahs"....!!dnb of the month..
Thanks you agaiN!
God Bless!
Steve
God Bless
Steve
preciate the love
God Bless
steve
sorry I listened 2 it yesterday and couldnt post my review
the melodies make it bouncy and while that doesnt always suit DnB, its not a bad thing anyway
well done
Trax
Thanks mate!
God Bles
Steve
P.S. Thx got i'm able to review now :D