I Can See Your Eyes - Clindsay

calssic

Nice intro. It has a prog house kind of feel to it. That vocal is ace as well as is the melody. It reminds me a little of Orbital. The sampling is really cool and for some reason i'm wishing i was stoned listening to this. Perhaps it's because it's a really nice floaty track. I'm digging that percussion/piano combo going on in the final part.
Cool as mate.
FR

Interesting project aside from the first cut. I've heard others use that same voice and I know good tones can be achieved with its usage which is what I hear happening here. The beginning does show a pathway, when the unexpected vocals meet up along the way the path breaks into two. Straying from the original road immediately the music meets up down that way. About half way in the music starts taking control and showing quite a scene of imagination. Can picture this as a soundtrack by how it builds and releases. A lot of good ideas mixed in the second half. This sound does seem one is able to see the views in the ones eyes. Good job and thanks for sharing. Peace,Dave

"thanks for taking the time to really analyze the track. This is very helpful and is the reason I've posted on this site".

No problem. That's why I post stuff here - to get a variety of perspectives as it does get lonely making music alone. That's why I like to give decent analysis - it's what I hope for on my own stuff but, sadly, only get from a few people.

I don't necessarily doubt my views on my work - it's just interesting and stops you going a bit mad to get some other views as everyone's got a different take on things. I don't agree with all of them but am happy enough to hear them. Some can be surprisingly insightful and even occasionally give me some new ideas.

"I played this for a friend and he thought the vocals were a flute"

They're strange and unusual for sure but I can't say they're quite that flute-like.

"2:47 may be harder to transition smoothly since it departs somewhat radically from the tone of the preceding phrase"

There are always multiple ways to make any transition better and/or smoother. Sometimes if I've got something that's just really awkward what I'll do is make a fill/transition that is really dynamic and a bit extreme to distract the listener from the change going on underneath.

A big drum fill, turning up the reverb, adding distortion - whatever works (maybe all of them). I'm not sure if that's quite what you need here; I just mention it as an example.

Good luck with this as you have something good and interesting here.

I love what you have done with this. You have taken electronic music to a new level of creativity.
wow..nice work!

wow a man has sung this ?
what an unbeievable !
anyway this is really nice and sweet .
i really liked this .
especially in seconds phrase of music everything sounds really good for me .
i also think you can add flutes or old shako to this composition in first section too .
thank you very much for sharing this beautifull track.
:)

Hi. I'm surprised to read that this a guy si nging. Surely it's been re-pitched?

No way he can sing like that naturally, no?

It is a rather good and weird vocal. I think you should add some more words to your description about the vocal as it is unusual, especially coming from a man.

This is all well put together and creative. Lots of beauty here, especially on 2:13. Vocal there really working like strings or a pad. Great ambience.

I like this track the more I listen to it.

2:47 it cuts off awkwardly so you could definitely fix that and make it smoother. Especially as it's quite a smooth track.

Flute is cool and suits the vibe. Good return of the vocal after that.

Very final ending is a bit abrupt. Needs to fade out more smoothly.

You've managed to fit quite a lot of activity in only 4.5 mins so well done. Even though it's only using loops, they're well assembled.

very cool !amaziiing!
i am in love with such musics.
begining is a bit strange but everything goes better when you ride on beats .
were you singing this ?
i loved vocal in this one very much .
Elena

chill out is the genre but this progressive synth music from the best...i like all of the harmonies and the groovies in the song...super work...Danke

You are very versatile! I can hear 6 different tracks on their own all merged into this one big track. Futureanalysis's vox however is holding everything together. Love the intro with that clap instrument too. Blessings. - Mr.B

I love it when I find imaginative stuff like this clindsay...its a great combination of musical elements that you have married together so well...really like the outro part in particular...great job....keep on...Ed

Very progressive sounding track with pleasing vocals! Excellent job, I must say!

Respect___Orlando

Cool track!