City Of Planets - Joell

4th Aug 2013 23:27 - 13 years ago
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Description : After long time im trying to make trance song..this is just a beginning.pls let me know how to make it better or what i do wrong

Comments (3)

If you have time take a listen and give joell some feedback.

RainaPharaoh1
RainaPharaoh1 24th Aug 2013 18:24 - 13 years ago
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Indozizz
Indozizz 11th Aug 2013 13:30 - 13 years ago
Nice intro, relaxing break and kickin mainpart, nice synth you used for it! great compose overal!
TaraToxic
TaraToxic 7th Aug 2013 14:36 - 13 years ago
Hey,
In all honesty i really liked this! only constructive critisism i could add is that you add maybe a riff or a faint arp in the intro to ensure the listener to carry on listening,because it can only get better...and it does! i just felt that the first few bars were a tad repetative which is a shame because the gorgeous melody and build up really are fantastic!
joell
joell replied 7th Aug 2013 - 13 years ago
Hey, IM so thankful for opinion and comments like this.Make my track better...and i promise i will do it better.I have made piano lead also so i will post it later.Thank you TaraToxic

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