Yo this beat is really hot. It's rap/electro. Me and my homie freestyled to this twice in the beginning. I think you should keep the hip-hop flow in the beginning going longer, or just make it another track cause it's hot! tWiStEd
This is good for your first track
I think the only flaw (not even a flaw) a suggestion
Is at around 00:40 to maybe have that sound a bit more in tune with the others
And a bass pattern would make this sound great
But in my oppinion, you did an excellent job for this being your first track
mine was HOREEBALL
-bri
Thanks for the review.
I know what you mean about needing a bass pattern. I need to get some more equipment and start making some sounds. I'm only using a laptop.
Cheers
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mpho.za (RSA)
I'm glad you like it.
You need to put some songs on here too.
I might see if I can make an entire track with the same feel.
I'm glad you liked it. You should post your freestyling so i can hear it.
I think the only flaw (not even a flaw) a suggestion
Is at around 00:40 to maybe have that sound a bit more in tune with the others
And a bass pattern would make this sound great
But in my oppinion, you did an excellent job for this being your first track
mine was HOREEBALL
-bri
I know what you mean about needing a bass pattern. I need to get some more equipment and start making some sounds. I'm only using a laptop.
Cheers