Fruity Square AKA Neptune - Avail

1st Aug 2008 03:09 - 18 years ago
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Description : A sudden outburst of inspiration and here is the result. Sorry about the sucky name it's just the best name i could come up with that can describe the components of the song reviews always appreciated :D

Comments (16)

If you have time take a listen and give Avail some feedback.

victormusic01x
victormusic01x 1st Jul 2009 19:27 - 17 years ago
I think the first thing I'm noticing is that your turnarounds and sound selection are luring me in all the time, very smooth, is this finished or are you putting more on top, this seems like it go into alot of different directions...like this and will try to listen to more of your stuff...thanks for posting your work!!

victormusic01x....in the nyC....movin' to the beat!

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Avail
Avail replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Hey, thanks. But unfortunately I can't do anything to this anymore as I lost all my old projects to a virus. I was planning to clean this up a bit tho
bones2008
bones2008 15th Dec 2008 10:11 - 17 years ago
ud be up on your toes dancing to this one, i agree wiv djcliff about the fills etc but hey onwards and upwards, you've obviously got an ear for a catchy tune so if it aint broke dont fix it
Avail
Avail replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for the positive comments ;)
sena
sena 10th Dec 2008 03:54 - 17 years ago
the composition of this song is great. its got a great dance beat it had me moving and turning the volume up! awesome job
Avail
Avail replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for listening, glad you liked it ^^
alividlife
alividlife 8th Nov 2008 08:43 - 17 years ago
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Tiltedbeats
Tiltedbeats 29th Oct 2008 13:34 - 17 years ago
yep this track is pretty sweet mate!

yer totally agree with ryckio, but there is a point where you can't keep refining, because you just get to critical of it, so once your happy with it just leave it!

but yer, i like the tune, its simple and has great elements in it. ditto to eshar, id bust a move on this baby HAHAHA

keep it up mate!
B.S
Avail
Avail replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks mate
I prefer to leave my old tracks as they are cause i work on em till i get satisfied and by that i'm usually getting bored too and don't wanna touch em as long i don't feel like i can surely improve them.

Babe? The tune or...? LOL kidding, thanks again
ryckio
ryckio 21st Oct 2008 08:24 - 17 years ago
I heard your trak a couple of times. Very good arrangements, keep up the good work. You got a very good sound. My advice, keep revising and refining it. Listen it more and more and look ways to enhance it. :)
-Ryck
Avail
Avail replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for your feedback im always trying to increase my skills by making new tracks but i prefer to leave my oldies as they are .. ;)
TraXnCtrl
TraXnCtrl 20th Oct 2008 07:23 - 17 years ago
nicely arranged......enjoyed the melody....good beats
well done
Trax
Avail
Avail replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for your review and feedback :)
bigemm1
bigemm1 15th Sep 2008 09:19 - 18 years ago
Loving the cymbal.. and yes it does remind me of sandstorm.. good call. I like the synth too.. very catchy. Maybe a little mor on the bass front but good work all the same.. Liking your work dude.
Avail
Avail replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Glad you enjoyed listening. Well im not used to ppl saying that i need more bass :D thx again
dJcLiFf
dJcLiFf 30th Aug 2008 21:57 - 18 years ago
Hey I'd like to say first of all I like the lead synth. Maybe try adding some drum fill-in's here and there, and a build up break in the middle that ties in to the main synth for an explosive end loop. Cool stuff yo!
Avail
Avail replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Glad you liked it, about the fill-in's it could be but i dunno i have some hostility against them :D Also about the middle i dunno about you but i'm in love with the moment that both synths kick-in. And about the explosive end loop i know exactly what you mean but these aren't to be found everywhere you know..I have one in the end of "Noize"
alividlife
alividlife 25th Aug 2008 08:52 - 18 years ago
or...

Neptune. But I want this one..

lol

Mannana Mata, (which in spanish means "Tomorrow Kills")

Severance.

Peace Pill.

The Penguin in the Pink Overcoat.

Nothing? These were some names I thought of checking out your track.
Avail
Avail replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Some of these are great names Neptune is a great name i wonder if it's fitting anyway i will listen ya + i think i will be stealing mannana mata too i have interest in spanish ^^
Thx mate
Enter_the_Return
Enter_the_Return 22nd Aug 2008 06:09 - 18 years ago
I liked this one quite a bit. I loved the synth melody and the cymbal effect reminded me of Sandstorm. Good job!
Avail
Avail replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Glad you liked it and about the cymbal i think it's quite common so i didn't resemble it to Sandstorm not the least bit :p
AcidParadox
AcidParadox 8th Aug 2008 14:16 - 18 years ago
Bass drum is really great on this one

synth is really catchy but cool
Avail
Avail replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thx for your review I'm glad you liked it but i didnt understand what you meant being catchy has a negative meaning?
ToxicVoltage
ToxicVoltage 6th Aug 2008 17:40 - 18 years ago
This is an excellent dance track
its on the brink of trance/techno (by the riff)
then it goes back to dance lol
:-)
-bri
Avail
Avail replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
well i needed a change of pace for it not to end up boring so i came up with that 2nd saw i used for riff
Thx for the review
Salkizar
Salkizar 1st Aug 2008 16:19 - 18 years ago
So I guess this was created in FS Studio going by the title!! LOL!!
NICE production on it man!! Think it needs more melody though. A bit repetitive for me...Try to get a nice lead on it with a break somewhere too..will make all the difference.
Avail
Avail replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Yea right guess :P
Thx for the review i find it a bit repetitive too but i have some other ideas so we will see if there'll be a new melody or not ;)
RogueAi
RogueAi 1st Aug 2008 11:44 - 18 years ago
Great track, why don't you check out my tracks.
Avail
Avail replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thx
Niclas199
Niclas199 1st Aug 2008 03:19 - 18 years ago
Great track! I didn't hear something bad in this track :D

Keep up the good work!

Edit after review:

Btw thx for the reveiw1 :D
and about the avatar... I have always had that avatar :P
Avail
Avail replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thx mate you acted quite fast here i just finished listening the song after i uploaded it :D
Also great avatar i never noticed you here before actually you have some great tracks now i know you thx to the avatar lol xD

my bad then sry :P

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