Italian Diamond - PLUR

This track has some real potential to be something amazing. A few things here:

1.) The main synth doesn't need all that muffling every time it plays, if you can help it. Once it's build up, it's at it's most powerful. If you muffle it, it's like stealing a puppy from an orphan. Leaves the listener with that needed finishing moment when a track is at it's most epic.

2.) Strings are incredible instruments. Their best use is when they are layered in chords atop one another. The cello makes a wonderful bass, but at the same time it seems a little lonely by itself. I think some strings in the higher and mid registers could prove useful to this track.

Other than those, I see nothing really wrong with what you have here. Well done. :D

Very nice melodies! cheers

well done :)

pretty cool! i could def hear this on the credits of a video game