Light - The Other Side - Lightward

the great dnb dilemna- cram lots into a song but make it all flow.i made a few tracks like this years ago(not this good though!)sounds great in separate parts but as a dance music track gets a bit overwhelming-or under-driven.maybe on an album you could use the intro as a build up track,but the dj-style part should be a seperate song-cropped-and beginning at 1min 30secs.i can hear the amount of work in the track its really awesome....* too much going on-simply means too many different genres trying to meld together.also at 4mins 30 the track sounds like it should be a new drop/song and its all good stuff, but id rather hear you elaborate and progress on one sound rather than jumping between emotions too often.i know i rave on a lot- but remember that in one dance track you should base it around one hook/one feeling/one dynamic.dont stop-youve got style.