East - Saraswati

7th Aug 2011 10:19 - 15 years ago
Description : Work in Progress: This is the first 2 minutes or so of my second track. Still refusing to actually learn how to use Garage Band, I am making this track by ear with very little understanding of what I am doing, but I am enjoying the results so far and intend to use them for my fusion bellydance classes. As yet the track does not have a bass line, but I'm not sure if I even need/want one. Track will be updated upon completion, but for now your feedback is appreciated! Thanks :)

**UPDATED AUG 12** Little more sub bass added... sounding closer to what I was aiming for, but I'm definitely still learning about this whole science o' music. Thanks for all the feedback & suggestions! Cheers, S.

Comments (7)

If you have time take a listen and give Saraswati some feedback.

yampaja
yampaja 13th Aug 2011 21:21 - 15 years ago
Great piece. Nice work across the soundscape. It sure causes the listener to move about.
Keep on composing.
j.a.
Maxomunz
Maxomunz 11th Aug 2011 13:17 - 15 years ago
Say, have you ever tried to make Hip Hop? I feel like you would be very good at it .... - [ ] Separate
RebelThoughts
RebelThoughts 10th Aug 2011 23:41 - 15 years ago
What type of string instrument did you use? I love the rhythm you put together. Are you sure you put this together by ear? Lol
Saraswati
Saraswati replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Hehe, yeah I put all my tracks together by ear (which probably takes 10 times longer and is a thousand times more frustrating) but it works for me because most of the tunes I make I use in dance classes, so if I can 'feel' that the rhythm is even then I'm happy! lol. It's mostly trial and error, but it's pretty satisfying when I get it right.
The string instrument is an Oud, but the loop itself it not mine, it came from here on looperman. I foolishly re-named it so I could find it again after the download and now I am trying to hunt down the person that created the original Oud track so I can give them a shout out. I'll post their username once I find it.
An Oud is kind of like an old fashioned 'lute'. It's the Middle Eastern 'guitar' in the minds of a lot of belly dancers. Really beautiful sound. I'm looking for loops of the Middle Eastern Rabab too, if anyone has any leads...
06BentonMcKenzie06
06BentonMcKenzie06 9th Aug 2011 20:06 - 15 years ago
Nice Panning. Very nice sounding. The deeper kick gives it more tension. The groove is chill like going on your way bout your day and then that switch puts you on your toes for whatever happens next. A routine to this song would definitely be good. Tight work, only 1 way but up!
uberstrat
uberstrat 8th Aug 2011 10:43 - 15 years ago
Not a bad little piece, perfect for belly dancing.
visionarysoundsystem
visionarysoundsystem 8th Aug 2011 00:09 - 15 years ago
Keep going with this Sara. Another fine blend my friend. Some sub-bass might work inserted every fourth up beat or so (if that makes sense ha ha). The change at about 1.20 took me by surprise then nicely back into the rhythm again
Saraswati
Saraswati replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Many thanks, Visionary! Trying out some bass options tonight... I feel like a mad scientist.
Diskonnect
Diskonnect 7th Aug 2011 11:36 - 15 years ago
Cool song, has a really nice flow. I like the percussion a lot but i def think it needs some sort of bass, even if it isnt actually a proper bass line. What you have though is good, keep it up! :)
Saraswati
Saraswati replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks! Still working on it... bass always seems to be my problem, likely because I'm still figuring out the fine art of mastering. Your feedback will improve my next draft for sure :)

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