Listen To Mini-Meals Electronic Song By BrokenScythe At Looperman.com

Description : I have been working on this for such a while now. In the process I have learned a LOT about producing.
Things like automation (Yes I do mean even the basic idea of inserting an automation clip in FL), furthering my EQing abilities, using effects I barely comprehend, figuring out how to eliminate muddy mixes, learning that stressing the hell out about JUST mixing is about 75% of the frustration production brings, but its about the same percent for gratification and enjoyment of the track, and a bunch of other tiny things.
In other words...I LOVED the process behind this track :]
However, as you may have guessed...I also feel like Im missing something here. I mean, what I want this track to be is a few things.
A. A DJ can and WOULD play this song at an event, and people would WANT to dance to it.
B. It sounds like a quality track, not pro, but quality.
C. It flows well and is coherent.
These are all things I feel have not been fully attained yet. To be honest, I really don't want to stop working on this until I feel its ready.
So I'm asking for help with it. Specifically from Electronic producers. Is this track good? if not, why?
and I do mean ANY aspect, from the kick to the FX used to the automation...I mean anything.
I would greatly appreciate it and return the favor.
(I also have a farkload of revs to return already! I know this! I apologize :/ )

Description : Feel free to check out the video on YT as well (Alan McLaren Project - Upside Down) of this 6min journey from electronic to rock with some psychedelic moments...
This is my latest, but also one of my earliest tracks.... any feedback is more than welcome, thanks :)

Description : 'The main point of this song is really about the frustrations of living in the overload of today's World of Tech. The consequences are impaired communication and that if you advance too far you end up diminishing what you had to start with, so you are way worse off.' Enjoy a 60s Rhythm with a modern deep Bass, a Sitar, a Piano from EvilPianist, a lost flute from UniverseHuston and some Oscillators :-)

If you like our work, please find us under kayos2 on Bandcamp

Description : Electro psychodelic trance

Description : Biggie Cheese Inc. has returned

Free use for whatever - Please credit me (BCI)

Any feedback is much appreciated

Description : Im feeling progress in this one. First time doing something more hardcore.
Let me know what you think

Description : A demo of one of my current projects. The chorus vocal sounds like "Aaaaraashe" to me. The song is in C# minor with a nod to C# pythagorean on the chorus. The beat on the verse was inspired by the Peter Gabriel song Intruder.

Description : This track contains only free loops from several Looperman artists. Enjoy! Applied loops (fully or partially):

CHOKISTARZ: 0224756-0051325 (LO Temp-Pop),
0224756-0053733 (DS Arp-1),
0224756-0053734 (DS Arp-2),
PSYCHOTROPIC_CIRCLE: 0071878-0003227 (Gran Stutter Vocal 120),
0071878-0003277 (Weird Voc 03 160),
VIDMEISTER: 0329240-0071338 (Ginger ARP Bass 06)
CUFOOL: 0345547-0050757 (Blue Clouds),
DJPUZZLE: 0000013-0010394 (Hardstyle Vocal Loop 2),
DUSTHILL: 0139050-0016020 (depro string violin riddm 02),
LIONEL442: 0284916-0046285 (Vocoder Chorus),
TLC7777: 0672835-0064591 (Trap loop),
BOSEMOSE: 0760223-0081446 (Robot love),
DJ_JEZZA: 0076999-0007547 (Tribal banger),
FRATERNEMO: 0133345-0006042 (vox grain beat delayed),
ALIVIDLIFE: 0158799-0035929 (Hmnnn Brush Kit Imaged),
EDGE70158495-0024508 (Feel It 2),
WALLYKETA: 0039447-0000756 (wallyketatekloop),
ECKSJOE: 0148594-0020057 (8bit Loops - Drums),
NENADSIMIC: 0086756-0005040 (Made in Reason),
YISRAELEE: 0171741-0008663 (PWL Loop3).

Description : I started this track 5 or 6 years ago but finished it just recently. Let me know what you think of my work.

Description : Retrowave Cars! Its all about the oscillators.

Description : Not sure what genre this could fit into. Leave a comment & let me know

Description : This is one of my earliest productions that I did at the start of my recording career. I did not have a keyboard at the time I made this song, so I improvised and used my sister's iPad and a 5 dollar GarageBand application instead, and plugged the headset jack into into my PT6 rig and did my best to turn each individual track (which were mono and there were about 25 tracks or so) into a stereo image. Then recorded vocals over it. My computer was so old and slow that I had to mix my music and then BOUNCE it to a new session - four times. My computer (which had 512 MB RAM and an 80 GB hard drive) couldn't handle more than 8 tracks at a time or it'd stop working because the processor couldn't handle it. Took me FOREVER to do. But I got it done. Had a lot of fun doing it too, even if it isn't my "best" work. I'm still happy with it, considering I didn't have many tools to choose from at the time.

Description : Junior Paes - Saying Goodbye (Just Alone)

Description : "no internet connection" Album on all platforms.

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Description : Long time lurker first time poster, pretty new to production n stuff, this is my first track in Ableton Live.
was going for a darkwave/synthwave sound, reminiscent of Justice, Carpenter Brut, Perturbator, ect.
Looking for some feed back, constructive criticisms or even just your thoughts if you liked it or not. This is just a rough cut on this current WIP, just the bones of it if you will.. If you have some cool title suggestions, would love to hear those too.
Thanks for listening.
-B

Description : NEON DRIVE is a smooth flowing electronic track with a steady progression. I hope it entertains you and creates a temporary dreamscape for you to get lost in.

Originally started in 2008, cleaned up and completed on October 28, 2014.