Mini-Meals - BrokenScythe

4th Jul 2011 05:32 - 15 years ago
Description : I have been working on this for such a while now. In the process I have learned a LOT about producing.
Things like automation (Yes I do mean even the basic idea of inserting an automation clip in FL), furthering my EQing abilities, using effects I barely comprehend, figuring out how to eliminate muddy mixes, learning that stressing the hell out about JUST mixing is about 75% of the frustration production brings, but its about the same percent for gratification and enjoyment of the track, and a bunch of other tiny things.
In other words...I LOVED the process behind this track :]
However, as you may have guessed...I also feel like Im missing something here. I mean, what I want this track to be is a few things.
A. A DJ can and WOULD play this song at an event, and people would WANT to dance to it.
B. It sounds like a quality track, not pro, but quality.
C. It flows well and is coherent.
These are all things I feel have not been fully attained yet. To be honest, I really don't want to stop working on this until I feel its ready.
So I'm asking for help with it. Specifically from Electronic producers. Is this track good? if not, why?
and I do mean ANY aspect, from the kick to the FX used to the automation...I mean anything.
I would greatly appreciate it and return the favor.
(I also have a farkload of revs to return already! I know this! I apologize :/ )

Comments (10)

If you have time take a listen and give BrokenScythe some feedback.

Phyruis
Phyruis 31st Jul 2011 09:27 - 15 years ago
some really nice ideas brother... not one for me I not usre if it's the genre or what but I think it's mostly because of the lack of bassline ... I know it's supposed be this kinda dance tune but for me it can't be that without a bassline perhaps you think I'm being hyper critical so I will play nice... the the drum track and the synths work really well and would fit well on any dance floor I would have liked a tiny bit more of the kick in the mix but still

some really nice ideas brother....

keep 'em coming
BrokenScythe
BrokenScythe replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Fosho Phyrius. Im starting to really enjoy your bluntness :P
That might sound funny, but I guess its nice in a way to see someone tell me I could do something better. Or even just say "yo to me, I just dont dig it. Dunno why really, but I dont"
Im thinking maybe a pad? Im tempted to email you and ask what yo think could add more to the sub freqs.
I gotta say though, I thought the kick hit almost too hard! lol. but now you got me questioning that haha.
Ahh screw it man ima contact you. I dig this track but if I can better it with something as simple as bass Im all ears.
Thanks for listening fam.
Alcraine
Alcraine 11th Jul 2011 03:54 - 15 years ago
Really love this track. Would defiantly dance to this. Maybe with some vocals from a dj's bank of acapellas haha. Got my head bouncing right away. Yea with each track I produce another headache comes but there's nothing better than seeing an idea come to life.

Keep Hustling
Alcraine
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 9th Jul 2011 17:28 - 15 years ago
This is awesome and uplifting! I would definitely dance to it! The mix sounds nice and clear, so it seems like you've been learning a lot with this one! I like the synths that you used too! Awesome ending! Good automation! Faved for sure!
Ghostzyden
Ghostzyden 8th Jul 2011 03:39 - 15 years ago
So, I'm in the middle of that same process, with not as much time as I'd like to spend learning and creating. That said, this is an awesome track and you're doing great dude. I really love the synths and there's alot of talent, keep it up! Fave - Nick aka Ghostzyden
gpmann
gpmann 7th Jul 2011 14:33 - 15 years ago
Great stuff for a first attempt on the genre... Keep it up, and make more electronic music. I would like to hear more from you in this genre, like Hutch said, you will be dangerous after 5 or 6.
Brent88
Brent88 6th Jul 2011 01:47 - 15 years ago
I can appreciate this one man, up until about 6 months ago i never used automation in fl studio... or even the mixer haha. So now that i'm feelin in over my head it's crazy/frustrating learning the possibilities of mixing and mastering..
Anyways about the track, def somethin different from what i've heard from you in the past, but a nice electronic track. Sounds like it could get a crowd movin, intense bass and snare! nice work man
digitalSKYY
digitalSKYY 4th Jul 2011 19:48 - 15 years ago
Very good man! I think people could deff dance to this track.
I would.
CyberSon
CyberSon 4th Jul 2011 14:56 - 15 years ago
I definitely feel something good going on here my friend. Clear mix and smooth progression. I would possibly fill it out a bit with with an additional synth / pad and a break maybe. I think it would get people up on the floor. Good work my friend.
Hutch82
Hutch82 4th Jul 2011 09:39 - 15 years ago
Struck me like Disk Jockee's work and other Scandawegian's if that was your first you're going to be dangerous after 5 or 6. I'm aspiring to similar things with production and it's like after a while things click, so much to learn. Keep doing what your doing I'd say and if you need a guitar I'm up for a collab. And it grooves great

H
BrokenScythe
BrokenScythe replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks a lot Hutch!
Awesome I will DEF keep you in mind man, seriously. I actually make Hip Hop predominantly, maybe we can create some fusion sometime L=
As for producing, there is no doubt that she is quite the fickle mistress haha
but once you start to get a grasp on how she ticks, its nothing but satisfaction :P
WithoutMyArmor
WithoutMyArmor 4th Jul 2011 06:36 - 15 years ago
For a first attempt at an electronic track, I'd have to say it's very good! It's very clear, progresses nicely, and definitely listenable!
BrokenScythe
BrokenScythe replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
wow that's awesome to here that from you Automata. I appreciate that immensely :D

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