Mini-Meals - BrokenScythe

Description : I have been working on this for such a while now. In the process I have learned a LOT about producing.
Things like automation (Yes I do mean even the basic idea of inserting an automation clip in FL), furthering my EQing abilities, using effects I barely comprehend, figuring out how to eliminate muddy mixes, learning that stressing the hell out about JUST mixing is about 75% of the frustration production brings, but its about the same percent for gratification and enjoyment of the track, and a bunch of other tiny things.
In other words...I LOVED the process behind this track :]
However, as you may have guessed...I also feel like Im missing something here. I mean, what I want this track to be is a few things.
A. A DJ can and WOULD play this song at an event, and people would WANT to dance to it.
B. It sounds like a quality track, not pro, but quality.
C. It flows well and is coherent.
These are all things I feel have not been fully attained yet. To be honest, I really don't want to stop working on this until I feel its ready.
So I'm asking for help with it. Specifically from Electronic producers. Is this track good? if not, why?
and I do mean ANY aspect, from the kick to the FX used to the automation...I mean anything.
I would greatly appreciate it and return the favor.
(I also have a farkload of revs to return already! I know this! I apologize :/ )

Description : This song has ethnic roots, the unique instrument the jaw harp is mixed with a techno beat, creating a wonderful sonic experience.

Description : hella loud

Description : Cyberpunk.
There are these days we are thinking that we have no brains, talent..... :) :) :)
I used a few loops from this site.

Description : EDM melody synth track idea. .flp

just a synth and a snap.

Description : Mixtape

Description : Sabrina Claudio problem with you

Lost boys renee

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Description : LOL bro ts gotta be top 10 worse drummers in existence fr

Description : A warm, soulful Afrobeat instrumental , built with smooth melodies, soulful guitar, warm piano chords, and crisp shakers. The groove is catchy, laid back, and vocal-friendly, leaving plenty of room for an artist to create memorable melodies, flows, and hooks. Designed for artists looking for a versatile record with strong replay value, perfect for love songs, storytelling, lifestyle records, intimate vibes, and melodic Afrobeat performances.

Description : Draft from my old defunct laptop. Lost some plugins and not sure I'll come back to it. The wee vocal sections were never added to and the mix probably needed more work too. But thought I'd post it for a bit anyway, if people like it maybe try to finish it. Pseudoble played some synth. Music made by humans.

Description : Instagram: @mcrsips

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Description : I wanted to create an EDM-nostalgic pop type track. Liek the ones Kygo used to upload in 2016. With a euphoric trance feel but electronic vibe. Highly melodic though. This can be a summer anthem. Although winter's coming. Cheers.

Description : It's a new version of track "The Lord of my world" with remaded 808 and I add a female beautiful vocal in 2 drop

Description : Made this yesterday night (halfsleep). I made that and i dont even need it. But maybe someone wants it before i delete it. Its 3 parts that u can cut and use how u want. Make something out of it, whatever you can. If you actually made something = send it into comments. 130 BPM btw

Description : Ab major, 130 bpm

modern rap/HipHop instrumental, trap drums, vintage synth, lucid atmosphere

esdeekid type beat

if you need the longer version hmu on IG. You can upload it on any platform. royalty free. Credit: prod. by Vibice