If Only I Could - BonusG521

3rd Jun 2011 17:59 - 15 years ago
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Description : I got this track from Looperman member DustHill...I think this is the second track I used from him...He got that fire....I tried to show what i would do if I had the ability to change the world...i guess this is the closest to a "Heal the World" song you gonna get out of me! Check it out fam and let me know what you think!

Comments (5)

If you have time take a listen and give BonusG521 some feedback.

BeatMaker4real
BeatMaker4real 21st Mar 2014 08:17 - 12 years ago
Man this track concept is a winner The beat and the hook is classic.The vocals on the other hand needs work..They are too thin for the fullness of the beat..You could try and duplicate the vocal track a couple of times. parallel compress and eq each track a little differently and don't roll off so much off the low end. and I can hear the vocals levels going up and down..compression should smooth them out.
That's my two cents..Bro this track, the words being spoken and the message is dope..you owe it to yourself to put your all in this one.
skandalouz
skandalouz 6th Jun 2011 17:26 - 15 years ago
safe man hook is fire, ur bars are good but u need to get in a studio man n get the quality up! i pay for professional studio time & it improves the track so much. Also id say work on ur breathing & pronunciation so you can get the full force of your voice out without bein short breathed. big track though great work
DjPlagueSpreader
DjPlagueSpreader 6th Jun 2011 15:04 - 15 years ago
Very good man :) keep it up the good work :)
Maxomunz
Maxomunz 3rd Jun 2011 18:35 - 15 years ago
Wow....Just like vortexsurfer said,this has to be the best rapping on Looperman so far.If only it was better quality........
vortexsurfer
vortexsurfer 3rd Jun 2011 18:13 - 15 years ago
wowwww that's excelent, best track i've heard on looop so far.
Great work all round , maybe a bit much rverb on the beat , but hey that's just me
love it and faved
Cheers!
BonusG521
BonusG521 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for the responses Vortexsurfer and SeparateProductions! Im still learning how to recordand edit the songs...haven't really figured it out yet...not a producer by any means! Just messing around with this audacity!

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